|Reviews for The Sound of a Smile|
| null chapter 1 . 2/12
OH MY GOD IM DYING THIS IS SO CUTEEEE SHRHRUUF WHY DONT MORE PEOPLE SHIP THESE TWO TOGETHER LIKE HOW CAN PEOPLE NOT SHIP THEM AFTER THAT EPISODE SERIOUSLY ?!
| simpson-yaoi chapter 1 . 5/27/2015
| RorylovesDoctor chapter 1 . 6/8/2014
that so cute, i love
| Fantome Star chapter 1 . 8/26/2013
Cuteeeee do another!
| SunshineProject chapter 1 . 8/15/2013
aww s-so...cute...*dies from the cuteness of the story*
| Insazy chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
I really like this fic a lot. The last few paragraphs really amazed me. The emotions in them were portrayed quite well.
The only problem I had was trying to decipher that large paragraph at the end. It has a good meaning behind it, but the words were almost cluttered in there. I suggest maybe separating it into two paragraphs for easier reading.
Other than that one spot you did really well.