Reviews for Alter of Waru
Guest chapter 22 . 11/19/2013
Great story, I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.
Guest chapter 2 . 8/28/2013
Is this a thinly veiled stab at the EU :p
kayladie chapter 22 . 7/30/2013
Hey! Just finished reading this and it was awesome! I loved the banter, and the more confident Luke, and the more receptive Mara. I also liked how you took some (not-so) subtle shots at the EU. I agree with a lot of that, as I never even made it all the way through the Bug trilogy, LOL.

I liked that you gave the alternate endings, but I think my favorite was the one you went with 'officially'. Still, they were all good.

Great job on this!
Lynda chapter 22 . 4/6/2013
Hello again!...

I love this one better than the others ending. Young Luke deserved to come back to his own reality and find love like the older one...

Planning a baby or not, this one is original. Ben has a part of his father, the old and the young one...
Lynda chapter 17 . 4/5/2013
Ah!... It is like a dream that you can not come out...

It was so moving... I cried a lot when I was reading this chapter (when Luke is in the Intensive Care ward). He wants so much to return to Mara, the love of his life.

That passage is written so well and so smoothly than it is much better than the books depicting Luke and Mara in the AU.

You could submit this fanfiction as a script for the next Star Wars movies, because it is so real and sade at the same time...
Hurricane Kazama chapter 22 . 3/19/2013
God, you threw me for a loop in the story lol. At first I was gonna comment about how it should have been 'altar' until I realized that you inadvertently played me like a fiddle :P. really, really good story, you portrayed the older Luke really really well. The multiple epilogues were also great as it really added to your crazy multiverses. Great job
MyBellaLove16 chapter 18 . 2/12/2013
Wonderful story. I loved how you portrayed the devotion Luke has for both his son and his wife. This chapter was probably my favorite, because I'm a sucker for a happy Luke/Mara ending. I also loved that Luke got two daughters. I always thought he'd be great with little girls. One thing though, I'm not sure if you meant this but... at both ultrasounds and at Ben's birth, for location, you said "Medbay of the newly established Jedi Temple." I don't' know if it was an accident or not but every time I saw this I couldn't stop laughing cuz it's a NEWLY Established Temple. Each and every time. Did the Temple get destroyed between each kid? Lol. I don't know. I just thought it was funny. I loved how with this ending you got not only a happy and alive Luke/Mara, but they have two beautiful girls, AND Ben and I'm sure (or at least, my headcannon is), in this reality, Anakin won't die and Jacen didn't become a Sith, so he also got a happy ending with Tenel Ka and Allana. : D Lovely story.
bec chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
I also love that there was lots of humor. Some parts were just hilarious.
bec chapter 22 . 1/26/2013
Amazing story! I love all the alternate endings. Luke and Mara were wonderful. You did a great job. The characters, descriptions, storylines, everything was well thought out and very well written. Keep writing, we want to read more L / M.
bec chapter 12 . 1/25/2013
Amazing chapter. Hilarious and emotional, I love every word.
bec chapter 9 . 1/25/2013
I must think like a man instead of the woman I am. I did not think there was more to Luke and Mara than what he thought. It was total surprise to me when they were married in profic. On another note, I wonder how Luke, Leia, and Han managed to keep that embarrassing kiss a secret for so long.
I love this story, not sure how I missed it cause I've read some other fics of yours. Keep up the great writing!
Onimiman chapter 19 . 1/26/2013
So you're having the DVD re-release of RotJ subvert the canon of the original RotJ which had Sebastian Shaw play ghost Anakin? What's next, did Greedo shoot first?
Onimiman chapter 18 . 1/26/2013
So, I understand that since this is fanfiction, u can do all the good things u want to the characters you have, like Luke and Mara. But shouldn't there be some kind of conflict going on, other than what was seen in the other timeline? It doesn't have to be the Yuuzhan Vong War, but it should be something Star Warsy. Just saying.
Onimiman chapter 17 . 1/26/2013
You know, I have to comment that the Ones weren't really immortal; if you watched the Clone Wars Mortis episodes, you'd understand a bit more. That, and Raynar Thul didn't return from the Reo system, as he became part of Thuruht.
Onimiman chapter 16 . 1/26/2013
Oh, man, what will happen now!
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