|Reviews for Did Humpty Dumpty Predict his Fall?|
| Leonora Chris chapter 15 . 5/27/2013
i actually had to stop reading after chapter..what..12..? 13..? and then read this last one...
felt nauseous while reading this thing...actually this even made me hate gibbs as well.
if i could i'd bitch slap(or head slap) tony's team members to the moon or something.
ugh..i know what it feels like to be cornered and that was really bad kind...
not to mention while being emotionally in a bad place.
that's never good way to deal with things as far as i've seen it in real life...
if it were me, i would have left that place and those people.
haha. maybe even changed my whole identity and start over in some place without both the team members and relatives.
..the way i see it...the problem was really with the team members..
they were the ones who couldn't do their work well without having one member in their team
behave the way THEY want him to behave... another thing which i have negative feelings about...
both family and team members throwing crap on him,
making/wanting him do things the way THEY want to...morons...big time...
although this gave me such strong negative reactions, it did make me feel something so that's good? heh.
keep up writing though. it's not like i straight out hate all your writings or something. that's not the case.
Nothing against the way you write, just wasn't too much in love with the characters in this one.
and at least there wasn't tiva in here(unless i missed something), so that's good too...
| Mo chapter 4 . 1/16/2013
Is this real? If it is, what episode?
| DS2010 chapter 14 . 8/11/2012
Man poor tony wendy shooting his father and he wanting to quick...
| Duckman chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
I really enjoyed this story. It is well-written, heartfilled, and smooth. There is a great sequence of short events and on-going plot in regards to Tony's emotional struggles. I really enjoyed the whole story, with some very unique parts and interesting character interaction.
| moira4eku chapter 15 . 8/10/2012
I'm so glad that Tony in the end was able to go back to NCIS (loved that he came back as the same time as Ducky). Hopefully, he will not let his family manipulate him anymore. I'm so curious as to what happened with Wendy in the end? Did he stop seeing her altogether? Thanks for sharing your story! I really enjoyed reading it in one sitting.
| moira4eku chapter 14 . 8/10/2012
Man oh man! I hope Tony doesn't end his relationship with Wendy over this. The shooting was an accident after all. I'm glad that Sr. told the truth at what happened. Talk about leaving loaded guns around the house! Looking forward to the next chapter.
| moira4eku chapter 13 . 8/10/2012
I like how you've tied up all the episodes here in this chapter. I'm glad that Tony is fine from the blast. I've watched that episode in slow motion as Tony's head hits the elevator. You can see the elevator door buckle in where Tony's head hits. OUCH! Why, oh why, were two very capable agents in an elevator during an evacuation? Perhaps they were helping people out and just got caught in it? I like the idea of Tony and Wendy seeing each other. They seem liked they really cared about each other on the show. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter.
| moira4eku chapter 12 . 8/10/2012
So, am I reading this right: Brenda Bittner was the PI that Tony's dad had hired? That is why she knew so much about Tony? What a twist. Always hated Kort, I hope he gets what is coming to him. So basically, Gibbs and Sr. want Tony to stop having one night meaningless dates but both want things different in the end. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.
| moira4eku chapter 11 . 8/10/2012
Holy crap! Poor Tony! Now his crazy family is trying to get involved in running Tony's life for him. He needs to stand up and tell them to "F%k off". This could only be really bad since they've gotten that poor deluded girl involved now. I'm wondering what Gibbs will make of this new development? Looking forward to the next part.
| moira4eku chapter 10 . 8/10/2012
Yikes, that was certainly harsh what his uncle said about Wendy. I guess she'd be older than Tony since she was his high school music teacher. I was kinda confused as to why Gibbs all of a sudden didn't want Tony to talk about what happened. Perhaps he realized it was too much for Tony? Looking forward to reading more.
| moira4eku chapter 9 . 8/10/2012
Hmmmm...so the rehearsal dinner was ripe with strife from Tony's family. I wonder what the uncle said? I hope you will let us know! Poor Tony, he really feels like he is being put on the spot by Gibbs. Tony does need to share, he needs to get it out of his system. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.
| moira4eku chapter 8 . 8/10/2012
Seems like Tony is still deflecting here. I hope he can finally come clean and tell Gibbs what is really bothering him. He seems so despondent. I can't wait to read what happens next.
| moira4eku chapter 7 . 8/10/2012
Man, oh man! Are you trying to make me cry? Brought some tears to my eyes, especially the last bit. Seems like Tony never really got over Wendy dumping him all those years ago and that he really can't stand the idea of her seeing him with that Bittner woman. I'm really anxious to see what happens next.
| Lurkerofffworld chapter 15 . 8/10/2012
Wow, well that was dark, disturbing, complex, and very original. I really liked it. Nice Job.! :)
| moira4eku chapter 6 . 8/10/2012
Gulp, now that is rather disturbing. Basically, she was stalking Tony and he knew it but found it intriguing and then he uh, slept with her? Tony surely has some serious issues! But still, it is not his fault that she was following him in her car, and she shouldn't have tried to keep up with him. She was right to commit herself to a mental facility. Her actions were really disturbing. Looks like Tony is about to have a panic attack in that enclosed place of Gibbs's car. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.