|Reviews for Two Worlds|
| xxXxx chapter 19 . 4/16
Holy shit indeed.. your stories are the best!
| Aqua468 chapter 14 . 4/10
Yes. I was indeed surprised.
You brought Luffy in too! Yay! :)
| Guest chapter 19 . 1/12
Keep writing please!
| ichigo1508 chapter 19 . 12/10/2013
EVIL CLIFF-HANGER! DX
*cough* anyways good job! look forward to future chapters!
| Artemis Decibal chapter 19 . 8/31/2013
Such an exciting story :D I'm always all for alternate dimension, time travel, and surprising plot lines fics and this one fits the bill superbly!
Am so super excited how everything's gonna turn out :D Haha I can just imagine something like another Marineford War with TWO Luffys and TWO Aces! This is just too exciting :D
Can't wait for the next chappie!
| samettikettu chapter 19 . 8/27/2013
And I was hooked. :B *random fangirling over the fic and squealing how awesome the characters are* Love this!
| alynawatlovers chapter 19 . 7/29/2013
Yay! You're alive! :) I'm so glad you updated. It's so very very good.
| Kitsune Foxfire chapter 19 . 7/28/2013
Like I would have abandoned your story! It was great to see the update. Now the plot thickens, eh? Loved the chapter.
| azab chapter 19 . 7/27/2013
I loved it a lot :)
| Anjelle chapter 19 . 7/27/2013
As soon as you mentioned the fourth division I was like "Thatch?!" and it took me until you mentioned Lukas's name that I remembered he was already dead XD That's what I get for reading at 5:30am... Really awesome to see that you're back, and with such an awesome chapter too! I can't wait to see where you go with this! It's definitely more tactful than I'm used to Teach's plans being, so I'm pretty damn excited about it. I feel so bad for that Lukas guy though... hope they get to him on time. Knowing you, though... probably won't. Or maybe. I don't know. Seriously excited to see what you're planning though :D
Awe, you don't have to thank me! I was happy to help :) Plus you've helped me plenty of times by simply listening to my rants and ideas, so I was just returning the favour. I just said what I thought
Anyways, thanks for the update and I look forward to the next!
| spoons-are-evil chapter 19 . 7/26/2013
Dear lord, I thought you were going to leave us wondering what the hell happened to Lu and I was like "No! Was it a vision?! Or something else?! Is he okay?! Nooo!" and then at the end I was thinking "Thank god, I'm not going to be freaking out about this all night." and...yeah. Damn curiosity nearly made me have a panic attack. -_- So, Lucas' blood was used on the rook and the note said he was the first, so does that mean Blackbeard is going after Whitebeard's crew? Or does it mean that he was the first death in the war? Or the first 'pawn' he is using to achieve his goals since it goes along with the whole chess thing? But then it'd make more sense if they used a pawn and not a rook...hmm, possibilities. I don't know very much about chess, so it'll be hard for me to theorize about this. Haha, that's an understatement. I have no idea how to play chess. No. Freakin. Clue. The term 'checkmate' and the names of the pieces (but not what they do or how they move) are just about the extent of my knowledge on the subject. Sad, huh? But even if I'm not a chess wiz, I can see that the whole thing with the rook is obviously very bad. Blackbeard's threatening them with that somehow I think. Anyways, enough of my rambling. The chapter was absolutely fantastic and I'm somehow even more into this than I was before. XD
Since this is the first time I've reviewed this story, just let me say that I love it! I read the bonus from Anjelle's "Resolve" and I decided that I absolutely had to read this. And I'm really glad I did. It's amazing! The idea and the plot and your writing is all fantastic! I must admit that I am easily sucked into stories that have good plots, interesting complexities, and lots of suspense that peak my curiosity and this is one of those stories. I've been entirely enraptured (did I spell and use that correctly?) by this story. Well done. :)
| Natylol chapter 18 . 7/21/2013
You should definitely have to do the Ace omake. Also, love this story is sooooo... awesome, really. Hope to see and update soon.
Ps; Quick question; do you plan to bring anymore from the pirate universe? It would be interesting seeing their reaction. Maybe in the future, nah?
| Natylol chapter 8 . 7/19/2013
"I'm not sure if I should be more horrified that all these people have complete faith in a horrid and corrupted government, or with the horrendous spelling of many of these people,"
Best One Piece AU fanfiction line I ever read. LOL
| sakura240 chapter 18 . 6/13/2013
Kura: -in another room, cracking up-
Berry: ...oh god...that part...with the song...was just too...too...HILARIOUS! XD
Kura: -comes in- I LOVE OTHER LU! XD HE'S SO FUNNY! XD And dang, Ace, you are so over protective! And again, dang, Sabo, you're so...wow! I love how he became childish too! :D Hehehehe, oh and did he really mean it when he said he was older than ace? I thought Ace's birthday was 1/1
Berry: ...it's a story. It's gonna be different. Anyway, this was an amazing read :) I'd love to actually see the One Piece Sabo but I don't know if you'll ever put it...but I would love for Ace and Luffy to meet him after :)
Kura: YEAH! XD Please update soon too! XD Until then, BYES! XD
| Recordatio001 chapter 18 . 4/4/2013
I just found your story but it's great!
I love it when I see Ace and Sabo being all brotherly and showing heavy symptoms of brother complex towards Luffy.
The latest chapters of the manga had me quite angry and a bit dissatisfied. It felt that the emotional impact of Ace's death on Luffy was quite downplayed. I understand that that is a large part of Luffy's character but I want to see more of the emotional toll it took on him. And I am now convinced that Sabo is alive in canon. There are evidences that are very blatant.
I hope you don't give up on this story because it is quite an entertaining read. Hope you update soon!