Aw! Was the Toye moment for me? Was it? Was it? :D

Becca, I don't understand how you can criticize your writing in such a way as you did! Your style is brilliant, your dialogue between Lottie and the men is fantastic, and you describe the details so well. Never. Forget. That.

Aw, thank you, hun! Hahahahahha, thanks! :D

This chapter might be short, but it's also captivating. The way you set the scene for Bastonge was amazing...
Have a lovely day! :)

I know I wrote this to you earlier, but here you get it again:
HOW could you even think that this chapter was bad?! It's brilliant! The way you describe the scenes, how you put the dialogue up, how you make all of it your own...DON'T EVEN THINK ABOUT QUITTING NOW, BECCA LYN! :D
-Camz
xxx

This chapter was amazing!
I especially liked the part when Loretta and Gene talked about stars. I could almost imagine them standing at the edge of town and looking at the night sky... it was simply wonderful :)
Have a lovely day! ;)

Heya!
So, I've just taken a bath since I became SOAKED at Beach Handball in the end. Damned weather.

Great long chapter, hun! Keep it up!

Good luck with the state competitions!
I love you!
-Camz xxx

I have to admit, the beginning scared me... you're really talented for writing drama, that's certain.
Anyway, this chapter was excellent! I liked it very much, especially the parts with Bull and Lottie together :)

As for ideas... well, I thought about John's letter to Lottie. Her father's body was never found, right? What if he wasn't in that house at all? This might seem improbable... but, what if he decided to leave and search for her forgiveness?

Wishing you a speedy recovery! Have a lovely day :)

REBECCA! :D
I'm home.

I am freaking home.

And why have I not heard ANYTHING about your half broken foot? :O Huh? Huh?

Great chapter hun! It's a great thing to come home to! :)

-Camz xxx

This chapter was so moving... I was really sad when I came to the end of it...
Your writing is amazing, especially while you describe Lottie's thoughts. But, I feel so sorry for her... I hope this story will have a happy end for her. I mean, she really deserves it, after everything.
Have a lovely day! ;)

Magnificent chapter, darling! :) Beautifully written...Poor Loretta though :( I think that it was good for you to have that break, because your writing is just as amazing when you still wrote on THoaS I love you! :D
-Camz
xx

Loretta is back! :)
No, it isn't too dramatic. You are doing an amazing job while describing her thoughts and feelings. I'm looking forward to the new chapters!
I hope that Gene will appear more often, though... I miss his little conversations with Etta... ;)

The story is great and I'm glad your back. Lotties not to dramatic, you could probably go a little darker. My only thought was that alfie wasn't there to greet them.

I like drama, and I think that your descriptions are plain beautiful, hun! :) Glad to see that you're back, and I can't obviously wait for more :')
-Camz

Hello! Just wanted to tell you that this story is wonderful! I really hope you'll update again!

I know life gets in the way sometimes, so don't worry about not being able to update for a while!

Good luck for the rest of your school year!

Have a lovely day! _

i will wait as patiently as possible :) i love this story, it always makes me smile!

I completely understand. I'll also have a lot of obligations these days, especially when the exams come...
Anyway, I'm very happy to hear that LaVerne's story will be continued. I like it as much as Loretta's :)
Hang tough and good luck ;)