Reviews for Fated
deep1692 chapter 32 . 4/13
ooooo... I loved that punch... bravo Naina ... Rajesh better stay away frm her. Raj n Naina had already been through a lot. Now no more pain..

Just waiting for the reunion...

Update soon.
Love
Dee
Guest chapter 31 . 4/10
Nice update! I am so excited about AmiyaSamir's engagement n the probable get together of all the friends :) I really like the kind of relationship Neelu and Alekh share, Amiya's jovial nature and a lot of other thing in this work but the one thing I like most is how all south asian countries are portrayed to be together forgetting all the enmity between them!
Thanks for this update and the promise of quick updates :)
deep1692 chapter 31 . 4/9
I am just w8ing to know how the truth cums out. Every1 knws... the oldies n d newbies... just waiting for d reunion... just a diffrnce... this time along wid d old buddies der wud b sme new ones...

plz keep updating on this pace...
just luving it too much...
so excited ...

update soon.
Love,
Dee
Guest chapter 30 . 4/7
Hey, thank you so very much for updating! I kept checking for updates for so long without loosing a hope that you will update and it paid off! :) As I have said before I really love your writing and this bit was great too. Hoping to read more from you!
KylaBosch chapter 29 . 4/6
Ah I love how this is all coming together and how their eyes are all being opened. Really love how you mix the tangible with the mystical without missing a beat how this could have gone all over the top but you've kept it subltle making it far more poignant and powerful to read. I eagerly away to read more!
deep1692 chapter 29 . 4/6
I have waited so long for you to update. thanks, thank a lot for updating... i was thrilled to see the update.

Its been so many years ... bt still thinking about raj and Naina I have the same emotions...

love it...
KylaBosch chapter 28 . 4/5
Ah you finally bit the bullet and updated! definitely worth the wait! i've been eagerly awaiting for when Amiya and Samir confess their feelings and i was not disappointed it was so incredibly sweet!

So does this mean there will be more in the near future?

Sorry for the hodgy reply typing with one hand takes forever! *faint* Anyways huzzah for returning to this I look forward to reading more from you! )
Guest chapter 26 . 1/20
hey, you are one amazing writer. i have read n reread all your fictions many many times (this n the ones on IF)! i hope you will complete this one n then come up with more!
ankita chapter 26 . 12/31/2012
Hi...
i ve read all the chapters in one go n i think dt ds s d most brilliant piece of work centered around raj n naina dt i ve ever read. This story is fantastic and i really hope dt u will continue it soon...
deep1692 chapter 1 . 12/22/2012
I have reread all the chapter's! I m missing fated! Please , please resume it!
Waiting!

Love,
Dee
deep1692 chapter 26 . 10/18/2012
Finally... they admited ...

He said "I Love U" and wat a perfect reply he gets... "Love is not a strong enough word to describe how i feel for you. " Yes , it could nt really be jest these three words telling the depth of there love... The longing that both have for each other... Finally they have confessed what they din't have'nt in there last life. She had regretted until her death that may be or might be if only if she had said that she loved him and he had thought the same that if he had just confessed his love for her in the last life of there then may be there could have been a happy ending... Maybe they din't had to wait for this long... relieved that they finally stay together atleast in this life time... :)

Amiya and Samir... they are cute... Samir is so shy to say anything... but i m sure he surely say something soon... and this time no one will have a bad ending...

Ah... HJ.. as i guessed Jaydeep Huda.. Oh! i knew it he'l do something inappropriate... Hussian said not to mention it to Asha... about she being similar to naina... But , he did break the news to Amiya... But , i m happy that finally she'l know it all... The way she has been curious and observant of everything she had to know it sooner and after all she is her best freind... she must know it.. Jest waiting for samir and Amiya's reaction to this...

Finally, again a fabulous update... and i will be waiting for the next updates... Really , u do have a god gift of naratting a story... U r fab... :)

Update soon!
Deepika.. :)
Guest chapter 26 . 10/18/2012
Finally... they admited ...

He said "I Love U" and wat a perfect reply he gets... "Love is not a strong enough word to describe how i feel for you. " Yes , it could nt really be jest these three words telling the depth of there love... The longing that both have for each other... Finally they have confessed what they din't have'nt in there last life. She had regretted until her death that may be or might be if only if she had said that she loved him and he had thought the same that if he had just confessed his love for her in the last life of there then may be there could have been a happy ending... Maybe they din't had to wait for this long... relieved that they finally stay together atleast in this life time... :)

Amiya and Samir... they are cute... Samir is so shy to say anything... but i m sure he surely say something soon... and this time no one will have a bad ending...

Ah... HJ.. as i guessed Jaydeep Huda.. Oh! i knew it he'l do something inappropriate... Hussian said not to mention it to Asha... about she being similar to naina... But , he did break the news to Amiya... But , i m happy that finally she'l know it all... The way she has been curious and observant of everything she had to know it sooner and after all she is her best freind... she must know it.. Jest waiting for samir and Amiya's reaction to this...

Finally, again a fabulous update... and i will be waiting for the next updates... Really , u do have a god gift of naratting a story... U r fab... :)

Update soon!
Deep.. :)
KylaBosch chapter 26 . 10/18/2012
Its interesting how Naina in truth was like a catalyst for so many lives, that so many owe their futures and their families to her. And yet only one could return the favour and this was denied him.

I wonder who else her life has affected and how their pathes will cross her own.

Ah good Amiya knew it would take more than that to stop the girl! She's too awesome to be taken out!

I seriously want to knock Asha and Dhiraj in the head how long will these two go on with their visions and inexplicable need to meld together before it finally makes sense! Ah I'm just impatient I'm dying for that moment when the truth is revealed.

So the truth spreads haha I love how everyone knows execpt the two in question XD Isn't that how it always is?

Love how these chapters open with the flashbacks how it brings the audience up to date on what is to come and why. It really feels like a show...

HAHA Aww poor stone Amiya I can alreadly imagine she's going to be embarrassed if she learns of her words while tranqued. I love that girl to bits but you already know that...

HAHAHAH I think HJ is as impatient as I am about spilling the beans oiy well can't blame him I'd be going nuts with that kind of knowledge too XD Kind of feel bad for him there lol he means well but now is the not the right time or place...

I really loved the last statement at the end of chapter 25 how in that instant he understands that his future lies in her hands. That something has brought them to this point and there can be no turning back.

*G* I love that since HJ's slip up Amiya has now been on the hunt. I wonder how she's going to find out she's on a mission now, good luck to any who try and stand in her way! XD

Ah I love the Samir and Amiya relationship how they know each other so well and yet they two I want to knock heads over so they can just hook up already! XD Ironic that Dhiraj is the one trying to push him to get on with it when he was once struggling himself haha surely he understands how difficult...

Aww that was such a powerful moment between Asha and Dhiraj how they just succumb. I feel bad and yet so happy for them. Bad because they don't understand why or how everything has come to pass. Yet so happy because they finally are able to admit what they've known and have been denied for over two life times. That was so beautiful how its with them unable to find the words that mirrors the weight of their hearts. That was so powerful and yet to bittersweet too! I am dying here for them to find out who they are and why their connection defies all logic or universal laws of physics!
deep1692 chapter 23 . 10/18/2012
Ah... i m back with my review...

Well, finally completed reading 23 chapters which are already updated... I dun need to say how i loved it... coz i have already mentioned it,... earliar... in my last review...

But , still.. i would still jest say that there cant have been any better continuation to Lrl... Its fabulous... Finally, justice has been done to the story...

I loved each and every character.. the old ones... Ali , Pooja , Abhimanyu, Alekh, Neelu And finally shalini... I can feel the shock she has had when she saw her... "Naina" her cadet Naina back... Naveens sister Naina... Rajs Love Naina... Captain Rajveer's "Naina 'Ah' Singh". Not only this i could imagine each an every characters infront of me... Just as m watching them all... u have naratted it so well it feels so so realistic... so much real...

The new characters involved... Ofcourse the first one Asha's best friend..
Lt. Amiya Chatterjee... I could feel her to be some what like Pooja .. Like pooja was 4 Naina... Amiya wat a humour she has... can lighten up any difficlt situation ... So, supportive and caring towards Asha and also i could feel the same care from Asha for Amiya.. Then, Captain Samir Hassan , Dhiraj's best friend. Well , i love the bonding these four share "Asha,Dhiraj, Amiya and Samir". Asha and Dhiraj, not able to be away from each other and behaving all weird when they are together in one room. And the way samir and amiya support them and try to make them feel light... Both discussing there two best friends always now are themselves in love with each have a great keep wondering why there friends react too weird ,as they know them they not of types to fall for some one in first sight.I wonder what it will be like when Samir and Amiya come to know that its destined for there friends Asha and Dhiraj to be together , to be in love , to be this way... What will it be like when they know that there friends have been in love since ages and offcoarse it isn't love at first sight... They are made 4 one another.

Then coming to Lt. Hussain Rajveer Baig And Naina sharma children of Ali and Pooja And Neelu and Alekh... As per there names they were destined to fall in love. The brotherly affection he shares for both Asha and Amiya. His promise to take care of both Asha and Dhiraj , so that they dun loose them again. Its wonderful... I can simply feel all of them. Ahhh... how can i forget
HJ ... i know who he could be but none other then Huda's son... Any1 can tell that the flirty attitude he carries... Oh... the characters have been so well narated...

Finally, coming to our Rajveer and Naina , today who are Asha and Dhiraj but 4 me they be Raj and Naina forever ... I love them so much ... Asha and Dhiraj both
fighting of there internal turmoil when they come across each other the feeling they have for each other whenever they are together... I intense and passionate love they share, jest waiting for the moment when they know that who they really are , waiting to see there reaction and waiting to see them together as Rajveer and Naina .. finally .. They do share a Intense love still when they dun know y ...

Finaly, coming to the writter , i feel now in jest some time you have been my favorite .. i dun know ur name or anything but still i feel connected through this story.. its a lovely story. And m thankfull to you to bringing the story such a great stage. I havent ever imagined LRL could have been continued this , I jest feel if it could have continued the same way.

Anywys... m eagrly waiting for the next update and waiting to see how the story turns to be... hope to see the update soon ...

Deep :)
deep1692 chapter 7 . 10/17/2012
Hey!

Well... m a new reader of u... Jest now read 7 chapters of this fic...

Wow... i have no words to describe it... Believe me wen i say i can't say anything to it... then i mean it. I guess if i use any adjectives like good excellent or anything... it will be an unjustice to dis beautiful story...

I have been a gread admirer of Rajveer and Naina... They r the best couple i have ever seen till date... Moreover, ppl admire or love Rajeev Kandelwal and Priyanka Bassi.. But i admire Captain Rajveer Singh Shikawat And
Cadet Naina 'Ah' Singh... The best ever characters... But of which cannot have been played by none other but jest Rajeev and Priyanka... only...

For a long time since Lrl had an end , well lemme tell u it had an end the day rajveer died for me... coz after that i wasnt able to watch itr anymore . I hated the fact that he has to have such an end... such a bad end...

I always thought somehow if the story could have completed... somehow.. if Naina n Raj would have been together...

U fulfilled my wish .. somehow ... to an extend ... well , i havent yet completed reading this completely but m on the 7th chapter... i jest started it today... and reached the 7th chapter. Firstly, i thot i would first complete it and then will post my review or may be PM the author... But i couldnt wait...

This is the best continuation that could have ever happened to LRL... I was sad at the first place when naina died and also when i knew that Rajveer had already been dead and will never return,... but as i moved forward with next chapters... I met Naina again... ofcourse as Asha Dutt... then met him... Rajveer as Dhiraj Kapoor... Oh! its so so so emotional... its the best story i have ever read... reallly ... Alekh, hussain, every one... are the best and are been potraied so well...

Finally, Justice has been made to Raj and Naina... hope dey will meet soon in the later parts... well... i cant wait to read ahead... just paused to share my view... coz i could nt wait...

I feel.. so good... reading it.. Thanx to the auther...

Deep...!
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