|Reviews for A child's desires|
| darkvalk chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
Very sweet and touching story. Vivio really love her Fate-mama, and it's nice to her and Vivio sharing some quality time together.
| SapphoSensei chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
very sweet. A few typos (foot instead or four in second line) and I question whether it should be "resting on..." rather then "rested on..." when you wrote about both Vivio and then Nanoha resting their chin's on their hands. I am not 100% which is right.
Anyway - loved reading it! Thanks for a great story.