Reviews for The Cage
Kaira-chan15 chapter 1 . 10/17/2013
I loved this! It was so dark and twisted; it sent chills up my spine! I like how you wrote what you thought happened when they all got down to hell - it sounds pretty realistic to me. Your writing is good, too, and so is your portrayal of Lucifer. Exellent work!
markiylokid chapter 1 . 10/4/2012
This is awesome. I think I wouldn't min, if you published it without editing the most violents parts as you said, because I like dark fics :). Again, really good.
Chiyume chapter 1 . 9/10/2012
OMG, how can you possibly say that you don't like your writing!? This was fricking amazing!
criminalxxxmindsxxxfreak chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
Honestly, this was fantastic and didn't seem "jumpy" at all. I felt like it flowed very well and was scary and twisted as shit, but that's sort of the point, isn't it? I'd say I would be scared to read the violent and disturbing bits you edited out, but I'd be lying. I'm intrigued. Because that's just how twisted I am. I rather think I'd liked to read them, but you probably shouldn't trust my judgement; I'm the girl that Googled medeival torture methods for a story and found most of them too mundane to work properly.

Anyway, I loved this! It was wondefully twisted and awful and grotesquely beautiful, in its own special way. I honestly think this is amazing, so job well done! I love it! It very well written and I honestly couldn't tell you'd taken bits and pieces out. Fantasticly brilliant job!
BloodyRosie chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
it's twisted and wicked