Reviews for Undeniable Consumption
Guest chapter 16 . 8/14
Bella's overreacting. yes what Charlie did was unbelievable, and she has right to be angry but its not reason for her to disowned her parents especially after in the first chapter they potrayed as a loving parents. its not like he's doing it for money. he also left no choice bcos Elizabeth threatening him. plusss its not like she's been thrown to bad family. and she start to enjoy her new rich family.
wantonlytoread chapter 16 . 6/15
It's 2015, is the next chapter ready? :)
Guest chapter 17 . 5/9
I sooo love this story. Its so hard to find a good intense, angsty story and with an interesting plot. I'm glad everything doesn't come together so quickly. I love the journey. I hope you didn't abandon this and you update.
Guest chapter 17 . 2/25
So Edward the molester is going to take Bella's virginity. And that stupid girl is going to allow her tormentor, the man who humiliated her in public who was cruel to her and made her get an eating disorder who cheated on her have sex with her? What a waste of a human. She should have gone out with college guys and lost her virginity to one of them. Instead she is going to give an undeserving prick everything he wants, like always.
Guest chapter 14 . 2/25
Bella is just stupid. She is the classic battered wife who just smiles at her abuser and begs for more. She deserves all the pain she gets.
Ramyfan chapter 17 . 12/31/2014
has bella ever heard of selfe-respect?
How can she even want edward after the way she was treated? Are looks really that important? Do you forget every horrible thing that has happened to you just because the guy is nice to look at? If you just changed the name edward into xyz than no one would be able to stomach that

Bella should leave edward but no she will stay with that manwh** because his name is edward and besides guys can do everything and woman should just get over it right?
wantonlytoread chapter 17 . 6/17/2014
When is sooner? :(
mdf2136 chapter 17 . 1/25/2014
Great chapter! I hope you update soon!
Guest chapter 13 . 11/24/2013
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Guest chapter 17 . 10/29/2013
10/29/13 - look forward to updates should you decide to continue the story line
Guest chapter 17 . 9/27/2013
09/27/13 - interesting storyline / I understand you're busy with your education - but - just curious if you might continue someday /
Guest chapter 17 . 7/28/2013
please update!
princesspglouie chapter 1 . 7/21/2013
.,pls update!:))
Guest chapter 17 . 7/16/2013
please update!
amnoregon chapter 17 . 6/19/2013
Please please update! Loving this story...
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