Reviews for Protectors' Interests
Guest chapter 23 . 12/16/2012
Ugh... Twilight... I despise it. But it IS a PG 13 reference, so I guess I should be grateful. Dirty-minded, but good, I suppose. Can we get back to the viollence now?
Guest chapter 19 . 12/16/2012
Oh, you are so mean! Chipmunk uses from a cappuchino, is that some sort of allergic reaction to caffeine? and really, "The Lion King"? Nice use, but why do you keep using disney? I'd like to request one from "Silent Hill", or "Nightmare on Elm Street". Use some PG 13 or rated R movie references, we're not all kids!
Dennise chapter 22 . 12/16/2012
Holy crap! You are intense! Nevermind the tiny detail conflicts therre may be, your writings are amazing! The battle scenes are so realistic that I've actually had dreams of them sometimes!

Please keep writing, this is amazing! Just please don't make her pregnant!
Evesgreenleaf chapter 18 . 10/31/2012
school should always comes first
Guest chapter 11 . 10/5/2012
niki jinx chapter 9 . 9/20/2012
more please xxx
msgemgem chapter 5 . 9/9/2012
okay back to the strange certain now that this story isnt for many conflicting parts...but seriously good luck with it.
msgemgem chapter 4 . 9/9/2012
ok maybe it isnt quite as strange as i though it was, and i loved seeing john taking care of her. really shows his protective side quite well.

next chapter.
msgemgem chapter 3 . 9/9/2012
this story is pretty off the wall and im not sure its something that i would like to read but im going to have a look at the next chapter and make my decision then.
msgemgem chapter 2 . 9/9/2012
her brothers and father are awful people and im so glad that john got her out and to safety. always think that he excels in taking care of people even though he never feels he can cos he's not whole.

onto the next chapter.
msgemgem chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
love the whole angle on her being finch's niece.

not sure on the whole her joing the team though - is she ready for that ? maybe not to be out in the field but to help finch maybe just to start with . i always thought it would of been nice for finch to have an assistant. not just in terms of the machine but as a whole.

i look forward to reading more - which im going to do now as i read and review chapter 2 now xx
Guest chapter 1 . 8/30/2012
it's ok
lionsat chapter 4 . 8/27/2012
This story has my heart, Chessie, and Reese's reaction to her state of starvation and abuse is really good, and how I would imagine Reese would react. Looking forward to the next chapter.