|Reviews for War Widow|
| catie chapter 29 . 2/6
i really hope theres a sequel to this very well written story. refreshing new plot. loved it
| kireitenshi00 chapter 29 . 2/1
I'd just like to say that I absolutely love your Arrow stories, and they're actually what brought me to War Widow and back to HP stories. It's been so long since I read one, and I'm so glad that your story is what brought me back! I just hope you'll update soon with a Part Two, and I'm hoping the news that just blew up the internet may help with your inspiration…
| H.JaneGranger chapter 27 . 1/27
I was re-reading this story and I just now realized that you called Vector the Ancient Runes teacher, it should be Babbling.
| Zemith90 chapter 3 . 1/26
The grammar in this story is sub-par and had to read through but i like the stories concept
| MentalBookworm1213 chapter 29 . 12/25/2013
Hey! I know it's been a while since your very last update for this story and there is only a miniscule chance you'll even see this, but I absolutely loved your story. Amazing. This is one of the best works I have read on . Which brings me to my next question, which is when are you going to post Part Two? Are you writing it now and are going to publish it when you are completely done? Because that is something I will most certainly read and it's killing me that Part One is now over! Again, awesome story. You have a writing ability like no other. It's true :). Anyway, thanks for the brilliant story and I look forward to Part Two!
| Akela Victoire chapter 29 . 12/6/2013
This was a great read. I have spent odd bits of the past two weeks or so reading through this (school, exams and all that keep getting in the way...) and it was totally worth it to read a Harry/Hermione fic like this.
| Kittencat3 chapter 6 . 10/30/2013
The story's starting to have too many plot holes for my liking. If Hermione and Harry are so banged up as all of that, wouldn't the alleged "danger" of Apparation be heavily offset by getting to St. Mungo's NOW? (Leaving it quite unsaid that the bad guys seem to have Our Heroes very much in their gunsights notwithstanding.) And how come these bad guys keep on pressing lethal, destructive attacks - unseen, unchecked and without meaningful counter fire - but they never, ever press to the kill? Surely, with Our Heroes just having crashed and being seriously injured, that's the point where they could be finished off easily? Otherwise why bother attacking at all?
I'll give this one more chapter, but "They-Need-To-Run-A-Gauntlet-For-The-Sake-Of-Runni ng-A-Gauntlet" bores me.
| everyturn chapter 29 . 10/29/2013
Holy shit that was amazing. I was gonna finally go to bed, but got sucked into this amazing fic. I loved it. You took a more mature, yet realistic to post-War life for the Trio and it was ridiculous. LOVED HBIC-Hermione, she totally kicks butt. Can't wait for part 2!
| Guest chapter 29 . 10/11/2013
Cant wait to read part 2! Hope you can post it soon!
| dedanaan chapter 14 . 10/9/2013
I'm really enjoying this story. It doesn't bash the hell out of Ron and starts at a different point than the usual H/Hr stories. I only have one observation, and that is about dialogue. If someone new is speaking, you start a new paragraph. It's a little jarring to read responses in the same paragraph as the original speaker. It doesn't happen all the time, but it happens often enough that I have to stop and re-read the paragraph.
| Hippothestrowl chapter 1 . 10/7/2013
An interesting start and mostly very well written.
There are serious omissions: The flashback was so lengthy that I forgot the start, seeing it as a preliminary to the real story. So the paragraph with 'an acceptable application package' totally confused me. I read and re-read it. Had she changed her mind about taking the Ministry offer? Or was it in lieu of the remaining exams? Then when my eyes lit upon 'new term' at the end I was even more baffled. Is she remaining at Hogwarts or not? Finally, I vaguely recalled the start, scrolled up, yep, she was going to a Muggle university! Scroll down again.
The next paragraph confirmed it was university but in another country! Where? Over the next few paras we have 'pub' and 'flat' which are UK terms. They are in the narrative, not her speech. Could it be Australia? To be near her parents? I continued blindly. Further on, a shopkeeper speaks to her in French! Sacre Bleu! Are we in France? How about Canada? Do they have pubs and flats there?
There are other minor omissions like a reference to the Forbidden Forest without any context. I had to pause to think. Same with the injury and I don't think that's even in the book is it? All these broke immersion. So, overall, these are things in the author's head he/she forgot to put in the story!
But otherwise, as said, well written and has potential so I'll carry on but keep my references handy!
| Guest chapter 29 . 9/28/2013
I absolutely loved your story! One of the few that I couldn't think of anything I disagreed with. Not even small things like difference of opinions on how people would act. Absolutely fantastic, and while I am sad that it wasn't complete when I got to the end, I hope that you soon begin with part 2 and look forward to when you do!
| Shubhs chapter 29 . 9/5/2013
I look forward to reading more.
Loved Hermione's characterization a lot. :)
| Guest chapter 29 . 9/2/2013
I sincerely hope that you haven't abandoned this story. If you don't want to do part 2, would you consider posting a summary for what you planned for part 2? Keep up the good writing and here's going to see more on this story soon!
| codyw1 chapter 1 . 8/19/2013
Re-read. Great story. So when can we expect part 2?