Reviews for Dark Light
Myroleran chapter 1 . 12/28/2014
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Guest chapter 1 . 10/16/2012
update soon
Dregus chapter 1 . 10/2/2012
light man naruto? i remember that. the guy in one piece could teleport, and even used his powers to make a light saber (not really, but it looked like one)
god of all chapter 1 . 9/29/2012
great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
ForeseenEdge chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
i like it so far and can't wait for the next chapter, just wish it was longer.
Rickjames196 chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
I thought it was cool... till I read other people will have devil fruit powers.. There goes him being special -.- And if you wanna make him gradually strong, he sounds way too dark. Hell he sounded like he could go against the world right there XD.
Krsnik02 chapter 1 . 8/25/2012
I dont think this story is worth to continue I prefer you continue True Heir of Slytherin after all Its your best story so far .. for me at least :D
wise walrus chapter 1 . 8/17/2012
this story sounds interesting and im hoping for more of it
lgreg01 chapter 1 . 8/13/2012
If this was a trailer for a movie that was going to be playing in, I would totally want to go see it. I want to know more! Please continue this!
Miradel chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
i like it so far

seriously i'm interested in this story keep writing it

i have a request though... PLEASE NO HAREM! (just so you know you don't have to fulfill this request or listen/read my rant, just felt the need to put it up here, sorry for being troublesome)

to tell you the truth i'm sick of harems

and it seems like in almost every fanfic with a powerful naruto he has to have like a bunch of different girlfriends or lovers of wives or whatever

i just want a change, you know

and if you notice a lot of fanfics for One Piece/Naruto crossovers are harems, like i said before i want a change

but if you have to have a harem then only use like two-three people and in his age group ,no older women(sick of that too)

sorry i shouldn't be trying to control your story or unleash my little rant on you but i want a change it might be better if you don't do so much romance
ddcj1990 chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
Very good first chapter
Yami Fox chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
Light-man well doesnt that sound mega heterosexual
serialkeller chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
Very nice beginning, really hope his clothes are not orange :D
There will be other devil fruits? pity it's not a one time thing. Also hope he uses more than just his light powers, he uses chakra, would be awesome if he uses genjutsu, there just aren't enough fics with that in it
BattleCharger chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
Well, it's an interesting first chapter... And I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter... Though I do wish that only Naruto have the power of the devil fruit... I mean, make him unique and stuff... Anyways, update soon
Absimilard chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
Well now, I was thinking that you might write a N/OP crossover, but this was quicker than I expected. In any case, you made quite the beginning (reminds me of Darthemius and his Way of the Rattlesnake a little), even if it was way too short, but it will be interesting to see where this one will go in time nonetheless.

By light man, I suppose that you are talking about the abilities of Kizaru (his devil fruit more precisely) and the like?

Regardless lets hope we can see an update soon, since there is only so much I can say about a prologue...
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