Dude, that aithors note is just sooo wrongLol, and great writing

very good i love your story

I can relate to Clary ever since pre-k

Oh my god Valentine is like the best wingman ever.

SO THOSE OUTTAKES HAVE MURDERED MY SOUL, but I still love this story, and I still ship 'em hard. Great job!

I can't believe I finished this story! It's been my source of entertainment during my free period for about a week now. I've had a lot of fun reading this story, despite having a few issues with it. I really, really liked it, and I can't wait to read the outtakes! My friends said to do it in my bed with a box of chocolates and issues, so I'm not quite ready to read them in a library where everyone can see. Anyway, awesome story!

That was so not funny, oh my God. I mean, it would've been a decent ending, but still. Also, I wish they would've talked about things more before completely starting over, because there are some deep issues that can affect whatever type of relationship they choose to pursue later on, but still. Lovely chapter, as always! Also, I want a Jace.

I love this story, but I do have an issue with Clary in this chapter. After she developed more as a character, and after fully accepting the blame for what she did, she should've given Jace a chance to talk to her. This is just gonna create more conflict for the two of them, rather than a resolution. It just bothers me that, just when she started to face things head on, she runs away from him.

OH MY GOD YES JACE BBY CORNELL IS AWESOME AND YESSSS. I'm so pumped. Yes.

I probably shouldn't have read this chapter when I'm this emotional, because now I feel like crawling into bed and staying there for the rest of the day. Good chapter, as per usual! But I'm in a lot of pain, so there's that.

I'm so sad oh my god this is terrible why why why. (I'm also sleep deprived and at school, so these reviews might not make a whole lot of sense sometimes.)

I really love how you're blending in R&J with the story. I don't even like the play, but I like how it works in this. Anyway, awesome chapter! Even if it's filled with pain and tears.

Actual internal tears because of Clace. I love them, and it hurts. And I love Seb, too.

I'm angry at Clary. After all this time, you'd think she'd try to share her side of the story so that he wouldn't get hurt, but she just hurts him. And I don't get that. I can't get that. I feel bad for him, tbh, even if this is all one huge misunderstanding.

I knew that the shower line seemed familiar! Patch, oh my God. Also, I call Jace "Jaceypoo" all the time, omg. That last part made me sad. :(