|Reviews for Instinct (The Chaos AU - Part 2)|
| Guest chapter 10 . 12/21/2014
Great story you have such a gift. Please write more Thank you
| Book girl fan chapter 8 . 6/26/2014
For some reason, Joe reminded me of Fusco, right up until he sold her out, and to be honest, still a little bit now.
| Random Ruth chapter 10 . 4/24/2014
Oh wow, even more perfect! I loved every word! :)
| xxx chapter 10 . 4/18/2014
That was downright brilliant. The best POI fan fiction I’ve read. The humour, the conversations, those wonderful flashbacks... perfection. Thank you so very much for sharing.
| xxx chapter 1 . 4/18/2014
Wow... That was good, and that’s just the first chapter. It’s amazing what kind of little treasures you can find on FF net. The description doesn’t do this story justice. Thank you for sharing :-)
| uriil chapter 4 . 10/28/2013
great story, as always. well thought-out OCs, good pace... yours are the best PoI fics here IMHO.
especially liked that little nod to Criminal Minds. ever thought about a crossover?
| Arches67 chapter 10 . 10/7/2013
loved it, loved it, loved it.
Thank you so much for this.
keep writing, please!
| Mithya Aviana Cailin chapter 10 . 7/9/2013
i love this fic. i love your character julie, will you be writing a sequel featuring julie and poi cast?
| Dimac99 chapter 10 . 3/8/2013
Another epic - loved it. Love that your fics have proper PoI plots and are really well thought out and written. Really like your OCs too.
| Lilly B chapter 10 . 8/22/2012
Fantastic story! I really liked Julie...and I loved Finch's relationship with will! It was great!
| Dickensian812 chapter 10 . 8/20/2012
Marvelous. Absolutely marvelous.
| Dickensian812 chapter 3 . 8/20/2012
Awwww, Uncle Harold and little Will! How sweet was that! You ripped my heart into tiny pieces and made me enjoy it. That is quite a gift you've got.
| rose griffes chapter 10 . 8/15/2012
This was just excellent. Your characters all shine, both those from the show and those you created for this, and the plot worked fantastically well.
| rose griffes chapter 4 . 8/15/2012
Excellent set-up here; I'm really enjoying this so far.
| Joe90 chapter 10 . 8/13/2012
That was without doubt one of the best fanfics I have ever read, and I've been reading them for years . You have a genuine talent. I do hope you continue to write so you can share your talent with the rest of us mere mortals.