Ohhhh this is getting goood

great chapter will you pair Harry and Fleur in a relationship

why stop?

Write more please!

this is good! don't stop!

Update Please!

Love this fic! canr wait for the next update!

Yo nice, I liked this chapter a lot. GaBE IS BAcK!
*cheers obnoxiously*
Can't wait for an update! The new writer is doing fantastically!

Ooh cliffhanger

So…any more updates?

Crucio!

That beats begging; my way the victim has no choice.

This was excellent!Looking forward to seeing some more.

shit fic

Dropped. This story went to hell quickly, and I can't imagine a reason for why you chose to ruin your story like this. You've started relying on coincidences and forced logic to propel your story along, instead of putting in a little effort to make it all flow naturally. For example, the paw prints that led Severus to the conclusion that a Hell Hound was involved in the death of the Dursleys... IT'S A PAW PRINT! Big or not, there is no way "Hell Hound" was something Severus would ever think about because of a few paw prints. What's more likely is they would think it was nothing more than an impressive piece of transfiguration used to kill them. That's just one example of how you've messed things up, because in the last few chapters there has been a lot questionable things happening. Another mistake I noticed was when harry was around 7 years old, he could create a whole blanket with his magic. But now, after years of study, he's for some reason incapable of creating a pare of gloves on the sly...

That ending was beyond forced. It's a bit disappointing really, the story had been going so well up to this point.