|Reviews for Fifty Shades of Parenting|
| pandoramia chapter 21 . 12/30/2015
Wao, is that a real possibility? Here in Bolivia that is soooo illegal, and not subjected to any agreement between the parents and the institution. Could happen, but on an illegal and abussive context that would allow the parents put the man in jail and start an investigation in the school. Children rights.
| pandoramia chapter 19 . 12/30/2015
Hola. Thank you for such a good writting. Flynn character kind of weak though, I mean, poor what we get from him, opposite to the original story and the possibilities of such a character since he is THE shrink that really helped. But I imagine it's the kind of details an editorial team helps to fix. You have the magic for writting, congratulations, you can go bigger for sure.
| bostonstrong chapter 2 . 9/7/2015
sounds more like he's hitting one of his subs..
| Montana chapter 42 . 8/6/2015
I have never been so emotional whilst reading a fan fiction before, your story was so emotional and powerfully raw I could not hold back the tears at so many points. The relationship between Christian and his children is so wholesome and I loved the sadness and punishment incorporated to show that fifty was dominant and at times submissive to his children who ultimately owned his heart. Thankyou! This honestly has been the best fan fiction I have read.
| Guest chapter 42 . 7/19/2015
Hello Dear Writer. I read all the forty one chapter's within a week. Yes there were parts which I disliked of my favourite hero Christian Grey spanking his the whole writing was good I am fifty shades fan. A very very very very very very big. Your writing was really interesting. I was hooked to read till the end. Have you written something more? Good luck and thanks for writing.
| Vasu chapter 42 . 7/18/2015
I absolutely fell in love with your writing. Its soo accurate, so touching and i could relate to pheobe. I actually cried in tears when she said to christian and ana that you are sending me away. I cried in tears and i was so sad and this fanfic touced my heart more than the real book. Grey is out, i read and he is just a smug, arrogant asshole which only made me hate him. Your fanfic made me fall in love with the guy again but for crying out loud its a fanfic :( :/
| bestdogmum chapter 42 . 5/22/2015
Thank you so much for writing this Fanfic. I have found it enthralling, emotional, amazing, funny and at times, it had me biting my nails and gripping the edge of my seat. This is just how I imagined Christian would be when his childten reached teenagers. It is a difficult time for all parents but with his issues it was bound to be a tumulus time for him. As for the corporal punishment aspect, I think you got it right. Smacking has meaning to Christian and it is something he would resort to. Interesting I read another Fanfic written by someone else about Christian as a child. They also included smacking when rules were broken, and this was smacking Chtustian. Clearly this comes across to many people as critical to Christian's core makeup, so to me you got it spot on.
I'm sorry I haven't commented on the chapters as i have read them. When I read a completed story that engrossed me I find it difficult to stop until I get to the end.
I absolutely loved this and just to keep me in this fanfic bubble, I am now going to move straight on to the sequel.
| Jkay75 chapter 1 . 3/30/2015
I really enjoyed reading this story, good job.
| guest chapter 2 . 2/16/2015
it's a bit weird that he spanks her in a way that he normally associates with sex...
| warr2654 chapter 42 . 10/18/2014
I found myself reading this from beginning to end last night. I couldn't put it down just like the 50 shades Trilogy. I came on here after finishing the series hoping to find something that would continue the story for me- boy did I find it! Everything was well written, everything was spot on. I found my self crying along with Ana when Ray died, I found myself smiling with Christian whenever he would. I felt nervous for Teddy and Phoebe. You did an an awesome job, my one critique is I sometimes found Christian too nice and too agreeable, but I guess its the fatherhood that almost made him do a complete 180. I feel he wouldn't have done a complete turnaround, but I still can't wait until I can pick up the sequel. Congrats on the job well done! I love it!
| Staci chapter 41 . 10/6/2014
I really enjoyed reading this story. I just wish we could have read what's going happen to those girls who picked on Phoebe and why was she in the car with Jay. Were the people involved with changing Phoebe's record ever punished? And also I read something about "...leaves her go..." Do you mean LETS her hand go?
| JWB75 chapter 40 . 9/19/2014
Love your writing!
| Guest chapter 42 . 8/8/2014
I really loved it!
| twlightbella chapter 10 . 7/27/2014
Christian, Ana, Theodore or Teddy, phoebe and Natalie grey as a family
| macera chapter 38 . 7/17/2014
This is a really good story about the Ana, Christian as parents and most of all Teddy and Phoebe and Ava growing up. I have read so many fan faction stories but this one is really, really good.
The writing is also very good. I only wish Fan fiction had a page were you could rate a story I would give this 5 stars*****