Reviews for A different life
MrsH chapter 21 . 8/17/2014
Thanks for sharing your lovely story. Overall, it was very well written, and I liked the Tonks/Harry pairing more than I thought that I would.

The one criticism I have is the consistent misuse of contractions like "you're" and "they're". "Your" means something that belongs to you; "you're" means "you are"; "their" means something that belongs to them, while "they're" means "they are". Those aren't the only contractions consistently misused in this story, but the constant bad word usage was jarring, especially in a story that was otherwise so well done. Nothing that a good editor couldn't fix, but it did detract from the story a bit.

Thanks again for sharing your story!
warrof chapter 21 . 7/16/2014
Beautiful Story! Though it's "while" not "why."
ProditorMagnus chapter 21 . 6/8/2014
This fic is special because this has R/Hr that I don't immediately hate, maybe because this only happens when they are all older than in usual fics I read. NotBad Dumbledore is also quite rare occurrance.
All those 'make love' sentences in the first half of fic got quite repetitive.
unwrittenlegacy chapter 21 . 6/6/2014
Outstanding, outstanding, outstanding story! Absolutely perfect ending and wry emotional. Loved it.

The only part that frustrated me was where you used why instead of while, but that was easy enough to get over. Wonderful job with the story. Thanks for writing. :D
Shadowsmage chapter 21 . 4/15/2014
love the story, honks is one of my favorite parings
Zecht chapter 21 . 3/18/2014
shame. Idea is good, but badly written :(
SiriusHadesWinchester chapter 21 . 3/3/2014
Bjalf chapter 1 . 2/23/2014
Dialogue is stilted and unnatural. Plot is good, but the writing is marred by bad grammar and spelling.

"the shrieking shake"? That's almost as funny as "Luscious Malfoy"
DylanL chapter 21 . 2/1/2014
Great story. As I mentioned in my review for or other harry tonks story, u make the relationship seem like it could work if she would survive the final battle. One thing I noticed about all five of us stories that I read is that u almost always use why instead of while. That is the biggest thing but I thought I would also point out that u should consider looking through us chapters for grammar mistakes as well if u don't already. I know an author can't catch all their mistakes so if u do already plz don't take my comments as me being a grammar Nazi or something, but seriously about the why/while thing u need to watch it idk if it is or autocorrect or wat but I don't think I have ever seen the word while in the few of or stories I have read. Other than that good story. Though I wonder wat happened with Ginny and did Hermione have any kids and did bills kids go to Hogwarts or baeubaxtons or an Egyptian school
DragonTamer01 chapter 10 . 1/30/2014
You deserve whatever punishment you get Ginny. NOBODY kidnaps a child and gets away with it!
Inferius1957 chapter 21 . 1/23/2014
This was a very well thought out and written story.

Sammyboy94 chapter 21 . 1/18/2014
Amazeing... I have tears in my eyes
Sammyboy94 chapter 1 . 1/17/2014
So far so good
ClownWhosFeelnDown chapter 21 . 10/5/2013
firebolthallow1572 chapter 21 . 9/28/2013
I wish this was a little longer and how watch his children grow through Hogwarts school and learn more of his life as an adult.
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