Reviews for What He Knew
excessivelyperky chapter 1 . 1/3/2015
Yeah, she's planning to dump him. But at least this time she really has to do it, and not just go "Ook, Slytherin Cooties! All your fault!" the way she did in canon.

And she is going to have to face herself if she starts going with James Potter. How much of his bullying is she willing to overlook because he's a handsome *rich* pureblood?

Alas, we found out that lots of people can become ethically challenged with that kind of choice.
LoneTraveler chapter 1 . 12/20/2014
Somehow if this had happened in canon I think Severus might have ended up less bitter. Just a theory... Any way, I like this as a bit of a window on them!
WriterJace chapter 1 . 11/13/2012
I like your portrayal of Lily! I know how hard it can be to write a character the right way. I've tried to write a fanfiction from Severus' POV but I always deleted it because it just wasn't HIM.
Saint Snape chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
Very nicely written.
Saramagician chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
Oh! It was very nice and gentle! Will you write a sequel for it? It will be very interesting!