|Reviews for HP: Chaos of the Phoenix|
| rb2312 chapter 7 . 9/29/2012
Came to the story late, i read all 7 chapters back to back.
I am hooked.
Remus now manifests the wolf an an animagus and he andctonks are together. Hint that she may have picked some traits up too.
Harry hermione and luna are soul bonded and likely to throw the plots of dumbles into chaos
Guessing molly's love potion will not work on harry anymore.
Hope fred and ginny recover, and that she is just an inocent pawn.
Arthur an unspeakable. That's new.
Not sure how hermione will take the fact that her mum is the world class nutjob belletrix
love the bit with magonagal and flintwick.
Can not wait for the reaction of dumbles.
Hope harry's new position as lord potter can help clear sirius
| Anime Princess chapter 7 . 9/28/2012
Well then, that's a cliched surprise for Arthur to be in the Unspeakables, but I do like the idea! Always have! I can't wait to read more!
| VizeerLord chapter 7 . 9/28/2012
make it quick please
| Katzztar chapter 7 . 9/28/2012
"...It's ten galleons… Wait. Forgot to whom I was speaking with," she finished with a sigh."
LOL Nice touch, many mearly state Flitwick is either A- a half-goblin, or B-has golbin ancestry, and thats it. They merely state it, some may give Filius contact and/or understanding of Goblin customs, but this is first time I've seen a fic that showed Filius ACT with some sort of Goblin traits. I believe that is due to his usually very upbeat behavior, so they think "goblinsurly so no to Filius acting like goblins" but you've found a way around that.
Minerva's comment gives me the impression that while Filius is upbeat, he has a goblin outlook on money LOL the following scene of them making more bets solidified it..plus showing this fic has him as half-golbin. I loved the bit with them betting on Dumbles reactions.
I wonder are either in the Order in this fic? In books Minerva is and Filius isn't. I used to think that Minnie wasn't since we rarely saw her at Headquarters ... at least I don't remmber a scene with her there. Since the is non-canon (love,LOVE, the scene of Artur being an unspeakable!) then it could go either way esp if Minerva is more ...concerned...about some of Dumbles actions. I'm curios since I really like fics where she is an independant woman...even when it concerns her boss. So many fics have her trust blindly in Dumbles and far few have her question (or work against) Dumbles shenagigans.
Have I mentioned about how I Love the twist of Arthur being an unspeakable? I've seen one or two fics that had Arthur having a history of being a hit wizard in previous war, before his kids came along, but not seen a fic where he still holds a high postion. Thoguh this brings out a good question...
In some fics have that no one is suppose to know who is an unspeakable, not even their spouse. Though at the campsite in GoF, Arthur is naming people he knows from the Ministry, one is an Unspeakable. So in canon its possible to know who is an Unspeakable, though not what they do.
By Kingsley's reation to Arthur showing his badge, I'm assuming this fic is where their identies stay secret, so I'm assuming Molly doesn't know about it. That would be nice twist. Molly complaining about money and Arthur having no desire to climb higher when in fact he is in the most exclusive dept of the Ministry, Dept of Mysteries.
I'm hoping thats true along with Dumbles not knowing either!LOL
I've seen some fics where Moody is in the Order...to spy on Dumbles for the DMLE. I've not seen a fic where someone else is watching Dumbles. makes sense the Unspeakables would, esp since Dumbles doesn't share info on Voldie or Harry or his thoery of what happened at Godric's Hollow.
No matter what,this changes things. Earlier we read that Harry was warned not to trust the Weasleys. But with Artur being an Unspeakable, we wonder if its just a few of the Weasleys they can't trust ...or if this means the Weasley parent that presents the most danger to Harry isnt' Molly but Arthur.
Part of me hopes not, that Arthur would be a strong ally, but I can't deny that would be a twist..well either way 'Arthur as enemy' or 'Arthur as strong ally' will still be different from other fics, they tend to downplay Arthur alot
| starboy454 chapter 7 . 9/28/2012
| Forgotten Silver Angel chapter 7 . 9/28/2012
I LOVE IT!
I can not wait to read the next chapter!
| Dr Stranger chapter 7 . 9/28/2012
Okay, that was unexpected.
But unexpected good.
| shugokage chapter 7 . 9/28/2012
Great chapter and good job!
| Red Phoenix Dragon chapter 7 . 9/28/2012
A good chapter with everyone coming to terms with the changes. Surprised that Minerva and Filius have not been notified of the change in status of Ronald and are more concern about bets and not wondering how the MoF had allowed the union to happen. My 5 galleons are on the headmaster's head exploding when he finds out.
Great your Arthur has a secret unspeakable id. No one would believe that. He is too good of an actor.
With the sharing of the memories from last chapter would they see the actual memory and then the obliviated changed memory. Was Ronald even there for the troll?
So what has happen to everyone else after that night?
Thanks for sharing your story. Please update soon.
| Loki's List chapter 1 . 9/28/2012
maybe I missed it but you seem to completely fail to mention just how Harry knows Luna. He did not meet Luna in canon until later. Even if you say that your story is an AU you should at least include a short passage mentioning just how or at least that the two have met.
Otherwise the story seems to be a combination of several other fanfiction ideas with little original content so far.
| jkarr chapter 7 . 9/28/2012
Looking forward to who wins that bet.
| alix33 chapter 7 . 9/28/2012
"Tonks was a bit vocal at seeing the small inner world. Stumbling, Tonks' mouth was on a run. "Cor and Blimey! Did the Lovegoods stumble down the rabbit hole or something? This place looks straight out of a fairy tale!" She was closer to the truth than she knew." - Funny as Hades, though, even if close to the truth.
"After small meal of bread, cheese and a bit of wine," - Not too fond of wine, but yum! for the bread and cheese. With how fond I am of that combination, it is a complete and utter miracle I am not the size of a yellow US school bus like those they show in TV shows.
"Looking about the room, she noted Kreacher stuck to the wall with a bit of amusement." - Stuck-to-the-wall Kreacher IS funny (even as a mental pic), I agree with Luna.
"The Lady's have bonded with their Lord," - "The Ladies have bonded".
"that little voice in the back of her head was being petulant about seeing him first." - Cheer up, little voice, Harry KNOWS that.
"Luna tilted her head. "Did you know there's a blank spot in your head? Keep it buried and it can only hurt you." - How can it be it and blank at the same time?
Anybody less dotty that Minerva McGonagall I have yet to encounter.
That thick tome sounds ever so intriguing...
"However, I do believe our bet has been thoroughly thwarted," he stated with a scowl." - Sneaky Hogwarts teachers, betting on the love lives of their students, though. Serves you right!
"Startled, Minerva started chuckling. "Of all the things to worry about. It's ten galleons… Wait. Forgot to whom I was speaking with," she finished with a sigh. Their wager, of course, was whether or not Harry Potter would marry Hermione Granger or Luna Lovegood, the star pupils of their respective houses. With the both of them, all they could do is swap an equal amount of money. Pointless and depressing for the half goblin. However… "On the other hand," he said with a gleam in his eye, "our other proviso still stands, so pay up." He grinned at her scowl and held his hand out, wiggling his fingers. "Oh, very well," she harrumphed, digging five gold coins from her money purse. "Honestly, the thought of them getting married before graduating." "A bet is a bet, Minerva," Flitwick stated happily. She eyed him critically, before pursing her lips. "You don't have to be so damned smug about it." His response was a rather toothy smile. Minerva then took the mickey out of him, and stomped all over his happy place at the same time. "I would guess that this means you lose your top Raven to the Lions Den?" The rapid scowl that descended had her chuckling as she handed the coins over. "Fair price, five galleons," she teased." - Hehehe.
"Minerva paused, smirking. "Five galleons says Albus will faint." Grinning, Fillius countered. "Five says he blows his stack." Chortling, they shook on their bet and awaited next September with a sense of anticipation. Whatever happened would be quite the spectacle, and they couldn't wait to see it." - If I HAD galleons I would have bet five of them on the blowing his stack thingy.
Snoring George made me smile.
"As a relative simple man to everyone," - "relatively simple man"?
| RobC chapter 7 . 9/28/2012
I like this so far.
| Kalelfex chapter 1 . 9/25/2012
I like your story, she continues, the trio is great.
| Butterflysparkle1012 chapter 6 . 9/23/2012
omg this is amazing so please corminue with it