Reviews for Time Enterwined
Guest chapter 5 . 1/13/2013
This needs more I'm sure Marcus is not going to leave it at that.
Guest chapter 5 . 8/15/2012
I hope you take this in a kind way as it is meant, cause you had a fantastic premise for your story, but i think you need to flush it out more to give more depth to the situation you have created, but once again a fantastic idea
IantojJackh chapter 5 . 8/15/2012
Aww sweet. Yah for Ianto being okay
PCJanto chapter 5 . 8/15/2012
Wow,was that was intense,You have to feel bad for Marcus,He hurt Ianto as well as Jack but he was driven by grief, Jack did make the right decision
what a magnificent ending for Jack and Ianto to a wondeful story.
Guest chapter 4 . 8/14/2012
Woah, Ianto!?
Next chap please and soon!
PCJanto chapter 4 . 8/14/2012
Omg,no,no,no,you can't leave it chapter,what a cliffhanger
Please tell me Jack go looking for Ianto and he's not thrown back in time with Marcus
IantojJackh chapter 4 . 8/14/2012
Oh crap. Poor Ianto. Hope he'll be okay. Great story so far.
IantojJackh chapter 3 . 8/13/2012
Yikes. Poor Ianto. Why does the bad stuff always happen to him?
PCJanto chapter 3 . 8/13/2012
OMG,poor Ianto a desperate man is a dangerous man,this don't look good for Ianto,Terrific chapter
Guest chapter 2 . 8/12/2012
An interesting idea , look forward to see where it goes
PCJanto chapter 2 . 8/12/2012
Terrific chapter,I can see poor Ianto or Tosh being his to read more
PCJanto chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
Great start