|Reviews for Connor's Adventures as a Dying Chipmunk|
| vickifay chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
Hey, this is avtually pretty funny! I love how they keep arguing about the most random stuff XD It would make it easier to read though if you made a new paragraph after each new speaker. It would look longer too :D
| Avelona-and-Sally chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
Whenever a new speaker starts talking, they are automatically given a new paragraph, like so:
"Blah blah blah," said Speaker One.
"Blah? Blah blah!" Speaker Two retorted.
The story is very funny, but the large clump of words I saw when I opened the link was disappointing. Please start new paragraphs when a new speaker begins talking.
| Evgenia chapter 1 . 8/28/2012
This was great!
| Writey Starkid chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
Thank goodness we have some more stories! I read both of yours. Ah, domestic squabbles at Rowan. Pretty funny. So this is what happens in between the "dramatic leaps and swordplay"...
Have a great day! Better finish that homework, Connor...Miss Boon won't be pleased...