Reviews for A Darkened World |
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![]() ![]() Not enough revenge towards ron. I wanted to read about him getting more crap happen to him for his bad attitude |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't think I've ever seen author destroy their own story in such a spectacular fashion. Dumbest thing you ever could have done. Snape being the killer was in every single paper, it was never thought of being Harry, not once. Idiot |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was very well-done! Thank you! |
![]() ![]() Well writen story with a bittersweet ending, thank you |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story well worth reading |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() a well written story. thank you. I truly enjoyed it. |
![]() ![]() Dropping this shit. You couldn't come up with any other way to force a confrontation than to copy other people's work? What a f**king waste. All Rose had to do was show Harry her tits and they would win the war. Voldy can't handle the truth that love will destroy everything. |
![]() ![]() What the f**k was that? No questioning? No viritaserum? No being tied up and restrained because she's dangerous? She's the daughter of his betrayers! Of course she can stay! She can't suck his cock and he can't f**k her because neither of them know what that is! The ignorant cucks! |
![]() ![]() F**k off for having most of the story be flashbacks. One or two PER STORY are fine. Every second f**king paragraph is too f**king much! Every time someone speaks or thinks has another f**king flashback and it's wasting so much f**king time that you're not telling a story, you're giving a summary. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I guess that's it for me. There are just too many lucky coincidences...what with him just camping outside a prison (Rose couldn't get away after she run). |
![]() ![]() well... wasn't this pathetic. waste of server space |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Honestly, I opened it, I finished it and now I'm feeling kinda just indifferent. It wasn't bad, but I didn't completely enjoy it. Don't get me wrong, I like any story that basically makes everyone involved want to make Dumbles' nose even more crooked ( no lameass Draco/Snape redemption), the end just left me feeling hollow. TL;DR wouldn't recommend it, but unlike most fics, don't consider it waste of time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! |