|Reviews for Two Lonely Souls|
| TheMooney42 chapter 1 . 9/26/2012
Truly, amazingly well written. It highlighted the characters perfectly, making the conversation between them believable. I enjoyed this thoroughly and hope to see more :)
| ReadingRed chapter 1 . 8/16/2012
I wish there were more to this fic. It sounds like the start of a great story. p.s. I review less often now than before because this new format seems to log me out of ff frequently. It's a personal issue that I'm working on, but if I'm not logged in, I don't review. I'll try to review more often but honestly my reviews usually aren't that philosophical or mind blowing so I'm not sure you're missing much.
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
hi i'm hojear
really is what I feel with this couple, their chemistry is so good, and this season the writers sought ways to remove them as much as they could, but did not have the actors playing their characters reflected the sadness to be matched with someone who do not love ...
perfect writing ilovetvalot...
I would love a sequel, you caught all of them...
| beaglelover719 chapter 1 . 8/15/2012
I kind of feel really bad that I wanted them to be having a raging affair. It's not that I don't like Will, but I really think that he and JJ are just Hotch and Haley v.2, and that they are most likely going to end the same way. Hopefully you will write a part 2 to let us know what happens when everything breaks. Thank you for sharing. :)
| delia cerrano chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
I was never lucky enough or unlucky enough to love my job so much it was more important than the people in my life. Maybe it is a flaw in them that they need that particular job that much...more than their loved ones.
| Huntress79 chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
Such a beautiful story! These two have a wonderful chemistry, not only in fan fictions, but even on the screen, and are my favorite pair in CM, so I enjoy every kind of story with these two. Keep them coming!
Peace out, Huntress
| mummacass chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
Both JJ and Hotch are in a no-win situation!
| jenny crum chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
| whiteswan chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
So sad yet so sweet at the same time. I feel for both of them. You just highlighted all the reasons I thought the writers were idiots for what they did last season; it's not every SO that can accept the demands of the job. And for those like JJ and Hotch...to walk away is almost unthinkable.
Is it too much to hope for a sequel where we see just how things work out for them? Please?
| Flames101 chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
Lovely story. :)
| whimsical-one-ga chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
nice and angsty with a touch of sweet. Love that you graced us with a JJ/Hotch story. Good capture of the struggles of keeping a career and the impact on their personal lives.