|Reviews for Total Pokemon Action|
| Sol chapter 55 . 9/2/2014
Personality: straightforward, happy, sees good in everybody but will take action against wrong doings, if a pokemon hurts a loved one... things will get ugly.
History: he wasn't very noticed as a kid so he doesn't so well in the spotlight. He is also in gymnastics.
Relationships/pairings: none (but if you could make him and vile a couple that'd be nice. I don't like seeing Vile being played like that.)
Talent: he is very acrobatic.
Other: he wears a black baseball cap.
| chimychar1645 chapter 18 . 5/8/2014
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| edingo44 chapter 53 . 3/20/2014
| narwhal chapter 52 . 11/22/2013
YAY! MASONS GONE! He probably gt a dildo shoved up his ass by Farra.
| narwhal chapter 46 . 11/21/2013
I like Yveltal
| narwhal chapter 45 . 11/21/2013
I want Striker to win, just because he deserves it. I mean, he was kiddnaped lke 12 times, he cant evolve, and he nearly killed himself!
| narwhal chapter 40 . 11/21/2013
Is Ebony dead? :3
| narwhal chapter 38 . 11/20/2013
Mew got LUCKY! Lets just hope Celebi doesnt get preggers, like Cressilia
| narwhal chapter 37 . 11/20/2013
I wish I could e in kevins position. PARTY!
| narwhal chapter 36 . 11/20/2013
I know this is kinda late and earlly...MERRY CHRISTMAS!
| narwhal chapter 35 . 11/20/2013
I was scared that Kevin was gonna get out.:)
| narwhal chapter 30 . 11/20/2013
Ooooooooo Mason...you got found out
| narwhal chapter 26 . 11/19/2013
I love the new Kevin.*Kevin floats in*WAFFLES! NOM NOM NOM NYAN POPTART!
| narwhal chapter 25 . 11/19/2013
I feel really bad for Striker...Farra should just understand that he doesnt want to be with her...meh
| mustacheman2 chapter 21 . 11/19/2013
Loved it...just the most amazing story wver. I really do miss Egrdos(dont judge me!). NARWHAL!