Reviews for A Sexier Bella remake
Emmy chapter 6 . 7/7/2018
NNNOOOO, you can’t just leave it on a cliffhanger! I loved the story and really hope you continue it!

rebeccaharris chapter 6 . 3/19/2017
Please update
jk chapter 3 . 8/25/2015
do you not know what ironic means?
whats ironic about bella being a model?
its not ironic its fucking immature
Edward leaves and she becomes singer
Edward leaves and she becomes a model
Edward leaves and she becomes the bestest stripper in the whole wide
its fucking stupid
RKD-CULLEN chapter 6 . 12/30/2013
I would be delighted to beta if you'd like me to. I just started reading this and it's got a really good story idea! Can't wait for the next chapter :)
Twi-chick34 chapter 6 . 5/11/2013
If You would like I could BETA your stories. Let me know.
blazzer12 chapter 5 . 1/5/2013
I love it and I hope you update soon
Kuh-Meel chapter 5 . 11/15/2012
Please review with longer chapters! O.o
cband chapter 5 . 10/2/2012
Update soon! Ill like to see where this story goes
Mireads chapter 5 . 9/29/2012
She should tell them to fuck off
Guest chapter 5 . 8/11/2012
I read this the first time. And while this is MUCH MUCH better, it still isn't very good. There are tons and tons and tons of errors. Every sentence practically. It makes it a pain in the ass to read. And really? You gave Bella every single power? Just not a good plot idea. I am NOT trying to be mean. Really...I don't want to hurt your feelings on purpose. But honestly, you just should not write. You are not a writer. The ideas are not good and your grammar and writing are beyond repair. It's ok...just look into something else. There are lots of creative outlets out there, but writing is just not for you.
dead beatiful chapter 2 . 8/11/2012
updaate please its good wonna no more
ScandalOlitz4Ever chapter 5 . 8/11/2012
WOW! Bella has changed! Will she go back to Edward? Until next time :))
militato123 chapter 5 . 8/11/2012
This started off good but wtf happened? U said bella watched vic kill them all then bite her n left and that a year later she hunted her down n killed her? Whats with all the lyrics no one likes to read that shit dont put that sh it in just to make it longer that sucks. U go off topic so much its crazy. U should read ur story out loud urself. I didnt even get half way down cause it didnt make sense.
militato123 chapter 4 . 8/11/2012
I hope shes a bitch to them lol
militato123 chapter 3 . 8/11/2012
Cant wait for more hope shes a badass not a cry baby:)
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