Reviews for Life After Death
JustBeCool chapter 1 . 8/24/2012
Great storry, I think Betty is right, you should've made it longer. I'm not talking about the sex scene, but it looks like you wanted to publish it faster, so you made it so short, but I really liked it! Please write some more soon.
BettyBurr chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
I think it's pretty good, but I would like to see more details, maybe even longer story (because everyone knows that you can't live happily ever after or something- it's just something that Disney made up...) I think you should work a bit more with the plot (because nothing really happens in here, or at last I think so.) As I said before it's great short story and I liked it. Please write some more!