Reviews for First Love
WillowDryad chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
I really liked this, especially about how Peter and Edmund made her think of Aslan and that no man who wasn't like them in that was good enough for her or Lucy. Isn't that what marriage is supposed to be reflective of? Christ and the Church? Nicely done. :)
MCH chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
That was a different take on Susan and how she felt. I'm so pleased you used Aslan as her first love and not Caspian. I really like this.