|Reviews for Shades of Gray|
| GreyJedi1 chapter 24 . 6/1/2013
Good chapter mate. Here question for you: Do you hate Griff.
| sgtranglin chapter 24 . 6/1/2013
Great chapter love it all, can't wait for more.
| Tager96 chapter 23 . 5/21/2013
Ok there are thd three ch that i missed now all you have to do is update
| Tager96 chapter 22 . 5/21/2013
Ok another good ch keep up the good work
| Tager96 chapter 21 . 5/21/2013
Good job sorry that it took me so long to read but i did it ya me
| shadow4040 chapter 23 . 5/15/2013
I normally don't read stories until they are complete but I glad that I didn't wait on this story. Can't wait for the next chapter!
| GreyJedi1 chapter 23 . 5/5/2013
Gotta love Revan to fix everyting
| masterdude94 chapter 23 . 5/4/2013
Another good chapter! I was expecting more emphasis on the attitude of HK-47, but that is just my love for his character. I loved the force jump tging with Bastila, and the fact that you killed Yuka Laka(i think that was his name). I am hoping that you will do somehing wih Tanis(the guy who has outworn his welcome with his wife) and with the Krayt Dragon. Anyway, i am looking forward to the next chapter!
| SaintOfAllSaints01 chapter 23 . 5/4/2013
Great to see the story is still going. And how interesting the way HK-47 was brought into the story. It was funny how you dealt with Yuka (?Luka?) lol. Write more when you can dude. cl :)
| general-joseph-dickson chapter 23 . 5/3/2013
| sgtranglin chapter 23 . 5/3/2013
Great chapter very good stuff.
| DarthHeretic chapter 22 . 4/27/2013
Sounds like a very good story, and seems like it will get even better... VERY GOOD!
| Guest chapter 22 . 4/17/2013
I got to say story is very well written so far. Putting in characters in these stories that others havent done yet and in an original way. Just gotta clear things up for me, if everyone already knows that he is revan why are you still having them call him avner?
| Eragon5443 chapter 22 . 4/16/2013
This is a rather good story ... I prefer an au over cannon most of the time, your punctuation is good and you actually put paragraphs and that automaticly puts you in the top half of writers on this site ... At least that's my opinion... Keep up the good work ... -eragon5443-
| Majin Prince chapter 22 . 4/15/2013
Wow it has taken me a while to catch up. Anyway love it thus far and can't wait for more.
You can go ahead and use the whole toxin idea i used in my story, it doesn't matter to me. Especially if you had that ide to begin with also. I love how you made Revan recognize that the gray was when the Force is at its strongest very good point. Good job putting Revan as the smart ass teenager and the superpowerful Jedi combo that he is. That is how his character is and you have adapted it very well I love it.