Reviews for Hostage Takeover
Guest chapter 7 . 10/11/2012
hope the next chapter is soon! great story
funnyface2 chapter 7 . 9/24/2012
this is such a great story, i know it is hard to write when you have so many to do but i hope this will continue soon...an thank you for clarifying your gender, i thought the pic was of you instead of Spencer, so sorry about that! your an excellent writer and i love each story! (Donna)
Nans chapter 7 . 9/13/2012
Ok here is a carrot, a push, some ice tea.I do so hate writer's block.
It does so seem that Victor is being so veery nice to Nelson and Sky.
It seems to me that Crane is the real goal here.
Or to have men that he can use against Nelson.
Hope that the block comes loose. A small earth quake of the writer's mine.
Nans
Nans chapter 7 . 9/11/2012
Yeap, it a trap for Crane.
Thanks for the Up Date.
Nans
Nans chapter 6 . 9/9/2012
Me thinks that a trap has been set for Captain Crane.
Why else not frisk Nelson and see that he has transponder on him.

One minor correction:
"I'll take a party of five men in one of the (boars) and pick up Nelson's trail," Lee said.
Needs to be boat.

Waiting for the next chapter.
Nans
AllTrekkedUp chapter 7 . 9/11/2012
This chapter may be short but I like it,I'm glad Ski is getting better,hopefully!
AllTrekkedUp chapter 6 . 9/8/2012
This is another great chapter! Can't wait to see what's going on here!
maxie chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
Looking forward to reading this when it is finished. Sounds like a great plot, something different! Thanks for writing it.
Nans chapter 5 . 8/31/2012
Not sure why system keep saying I am reviewing the first chapter.
This is for chapter 5
Oh my GAWD! The Admiral in the flying Sub with Bradfield.
And a wounded Ski.
What will they do.
Keep these chapters coming.
Nans
funnyface2 chapter 5 . 9/2/2012
love it...anything with Chip in it is fantastic! great writing
Nans chapter 4 . 8/30/2012
Great to see the guys have help now.
I just love a cliffhangrer
Nans
AllTrekkedUp chapter 5 . 9/1/2012
You must really like Ski to hurt him so badly! I love this chapter;just one small thing though,'I'll take him to you.' Should be 'I'll take you to him.' But that don't stop this from being awesome! :)
AllTrekkedUp chapter 4 . 9/1/2012
I'm glad Chip mostly ok,still feel sorry for Ski though. A cliffhanger! I must now read the next chapter!
Nans chapter 4 . 8/29/2012
Oh a cliffhanger, I so love cliffhangers.
One minor suggestion.
(Lee was 'started' to wake up when he heard movement from the bed and saw Ski trying to turn onto his side.)

Should be 'starting'
Nans
Nans chapter 3 . 8/29/2012
Another fine chapter. and I see another one to read.
Thank you for sharing.
Nans
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