|Reviews for Kyogre's Ambition|
| Fallen Vanguard chapter 3 . 11/13/2012
Very interesting story, if a bit short. People tend to prefer Aqua over Magma but, though both are deluded extremists, Aqua makes no sense. People NEED land to live MORE than the sea. We gain much from the sea, we do, but the stability of land to stand on, joined land, is much better than having to boat or fly between islands (unless Aqua is truly mad and plans on having humans live under water).
That aside, it was quite good. Crazy ass Nobunaga calmed down this time, especially since he already went through this failure once. He was also an extremist but out of all antagonists his was by far the best goal. To win a war so that no more may be fought. I guess it adds up, but life is more complicated than that.
| joycewu333 chapter 3 . 8/25/2012
Awesome concept...and a nice story overall...
| supersexyghotmew95 chapter 3 . 8/25/2012
| Kaito Lune chapter 2 . 8/19/2012
Very nice. I feel that there was a little too much jumping though. Did you have dividers in this chapter? If so, I didn't really see any.
| Kaito Lune chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
Oh, this is going to be a fun read. A story using the elements of Pokemon conquest in modern day. I'm looking forward to more!
| kinglugia chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
Thou shall continue this story and finish it.
Thou shalt be supported by yours truly.
We, the audience, demand more!
| supersexyghotmew95 chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
is mew gonna be in this will mew fight the evil celabi