|Reviews for Son of the Huntress: The Lightning Thief|
| ZFlame1 chapter 23 . 3/28
my only complaints are the grammar at times and the spelling of some words.
| minichow chapter 21 . 3/27
HAHA I love your take on Gabe's last name, unless that's his real last name... then this would just be awkward...
| Sam Ward chapter 23 . 3/10
This was a RLLY GOOD story!
| shedges19 chapter 1 . 3/6
What happened to titain curse
| Infernus est in animo chapter 16 . 1/16
Let's do the time warp again...
Let's do the time warp again...
It's just a step to the right...
And a hop to the left...
| Infernus est in animo chapter 8 . 1/15
Okay, ignore the previous pairing suggestion I made, while gran on grandson is not the most incestuous thing in Greek mythology "cough" ZeusHera "cough" brother sister "cough". It does go slightly beyond modern and elemental sensibilities.
| Infernus est in animo chapter 7 . 1/15
I'm well behind but I could totally see Naruto, S I-just-forgot-her-name and Hestia getting into a Threeway relationship with the former twos infatuation with each panning out fully and the hearth goddesses interest in complete homes and families getting involved and eventually joining them once they have properly established themselves.
| Silver566 chapter 5 . 12/28/2016
Katie is the head counsellor for demeters cabin
| fenixrojo36 chapter 23 . 11/16/2016
| KakeruPB chapter 15 . 10/25/2016
To be honest I thought Naruto could've handled Ares aura which made him mad. Than again he didn't go on that trip with Jiraya to learn how to control the fox chakra. So he isn't that well at handling it like the one in canon can.
| Guest chapter 4 . 9/3/2016
Why is it so hard for authors to stick with realistic parings. I mean seriously, this story has an interesting plot, few grammatical errors, and interesting character interaction. The double paring, much like the dreaded harem stories just takes any form of realism out the romantical aspect of the story. It's nigh impossible to really connect and relate to the romance because realistically, rarely ANY woman would be willing to SHARE the man they love with someone else. Same for men. This is not a flame. I genuinely enjoyed aspects of this story, but I feel the need to point out that it's making the same flaws alot of other stories do. Lets be honest the ONLY reasons people read stories for harems, or multi paring are either they like too imagine themselves with a harem, or for Lemons.
| dojomojo chapter 23 . 6/24/2016
This is great. Onward, to the sequel!
| dojomojo chapter 1 . 6/23/2016
this better be as good as it looks, I'll have only this to read all the way to LA
| Monster King chapter 23 . 6/16/2016
i really liked the story especially your depiction of Artemis I liked it and found the pairing Naruto X Silena as enjoyable to read the only issue i may have with the story is potentially the Ares Bashing but then again he is a jackass both in the Percy Jackson world and in actual Greek Mythology. Great Job with the story dude and i will enjoy reading the sequel
| Enthusiast117 chapter 4 . 6/9/2016
I am disappointed that you seem to be sticking to the books.
Only so many excuses can be made before it starts getting ridiculous. There is no way Percy's mom should have been killed with a trained Shinobi standing right there. Escort missions are something he's done before you know.