|Reviews for Final Days of the King|
| onepieceforlife2703 chapter 3 . 5/9
AAAARRRRRGGGGGHHHHHHH! YOU MUST UPDATE! THIS IS AS GOOD AS THE FAULT IN OUR STARS! BETTER!
| wushu723 chapter 3 . 4/2/2014
hope you update soon...
| Guest chapter 3 . 3/18/2014
a bit ooc, but w/e
| Guester chapter 3 . 5/13/2013
Pweeaasee coonnnttttiiinnnueeeesssss tthee storrriiiieeesss.
| My Skydream chapter 3 . 12/18/2012
Come Whit More! Come Whit More!
It so sad, but it's still awesome.
I WANT TO READ!
...pleas...*puppy eyes* ôô
| gone-with-2014 chapter 3 . 10/4/2012
Upload soon! I love this3333 xF
| DarkestHourBeforeTheDawn chapter 3 . 9/1/2012
yay can't wait for ch4 :D
| ShikaXLover chapter 3 . 8/29/2012
Holy shit that was good. I almost cried at the Robin's thoughts bit, and I rarely cry when people get all mushy, but that was gooooooood! Can't wait for next chappie :D
| dragonick711 chapter 3 . 8/31/2012
I really like this story, the idea is interesting and it really connects with the reader. My only advice is to watch your grammar and check to see if you're not missing a word in a sentence. I also totally agree with you on the lack of LuffyxRobin stories out there, I mean it's a great pairing and it comes from and fandom that has a huge amount of stories where the main is paired with characters of the same gender (which is common for most anime anyway), has the main character genderbent, and paired with another character who for all intents and purposes is his his brother. I mean with all the languages put together there are 57 LuffyxRobin romance stories but over 100 AcexLuffy stories out there, not to mention all the ZoroxLuffy that probably makes up a huge amount of Luffy romance stories. Man that was a lot to type sorry about the rant I just really like LuffyxRobin and the overall lack of it is something I find ridiculous. Anyway I hope your next chapter comes out soon because I really like the bonds you have setup between the characters, and the whole thing with the light-bulb and spontaneously smart Luffy is awesome keep it up.
| 000000000000000000000Zero00000 chapter 3 . 8/29/2012
I get the impression that everyone would welcome Robin to live with them at their island/homes. Even Zoro would probably let her go with him since he doesn't have a home and doesn't seem too concerned with arriving at any destination.
| redmustarddd chapter 3 . 8/29/2012
Dude this was very well thought out.
| Eternal-DreamWriter chapter 3 . 8/29/2012
THANK YOU! This was so awesome... I cried... Now my tissues box is empty again.. (Damn it!) Gotta go buy some more XDD Love this story! Cant wait for more and Chopper is so adorable at the end. He is so sweet trying to cure Luffy's illness ;_; I dont want luffy to die
| Acrylic Chirp chapter 3 . 8/29/2012
Please please please post new chapters! This is really good so far! Though it's terribly sad that poor Luffy is so gravely ill...
| Deactivated-AxC chapter 3 . 8/29/2012
*sob* update soon... My fragile heart can't take the pain of waiting
| A-bazooka-Fire chapter 2 . 8/24/2012
Sad! *snob!* but still so beautiful!