Reviews for Gentle Kisses
IronAmerica chapter 1 . 8/13/2012
Can now review this. (While imagining Vince as Johnny Rico from Starship Troopers. :P)

Tender is nice. And Vince is a sweetie anyways, blockheadedness aside. :P

Orwell is a very bad liar. That is all. (I'm guessing she didn't inherit her father's ability for bullshit? Lol.)

Vince is a sweetie, even if he thinks he's oblivious. (Okay, he is, but that's not the point.)

Thank god one of them is sensible! And hey, I can read this as shipping or friendship! Awesome job! (Now you just need to get LM to read this and see what she says.)

No quibbles really. Except for some weird word choices that make me think he's playing Orwell like a guitar. Huh. *shrugs*

-IA
XxDeathStarxX chapter 1 . 8/13/2012
Beautiful :) It's always interesting to see Vince's reaction to Orwell, if he actually went to see her - and I really liked this version.