|Reviews for Not the ghost of a chance|
| ccase13 chapter 1 . 10/22/2012
A sad but probably true view of a wise Lisa.
| Dizzo chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
Wow, powerful stufff - indeed someone did come and take him away!
It must have been a very difficult time for Lisa, I'm sure Dean must have been very challenging to live with during that period. This was a great POV from someone who didn't really fully understand the terrible situation Dean was in!
As always, nicely done Kate x
| OpheliacAngel chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
A gorgeous look inside Lisa's head. Thanks for the brief look into the life she, Ben and Dean had together for just that short amount of time :)
And the ending, wow, love the ending.
| mainegirlwrites chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
...and that person taking him away would be Sam. Bet Dean never thought of that! I adore this drabble so much, its so touching and descriptive. Well done! Best, Randee
| 1983Sarah chapter 1 . 8/13/2012
Wow, really great! Very somber and ominous. It really resonated with me while I was reading it, great work, worth the 200 words!
| Madd Aless chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
Interesting view point. Well done
| SupernaturallyEgocentric chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
| Tifaching chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
Oh, break my heart, why don't you. Poor Lisa. The monsters are always waiting.
| Twinchy chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
I think you are right, she probably knew this whole thing between them could only last so long - and that's not even considering the unhappy endings "by monster".
| Edina Clouds chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
"She hadn't planned to love him, knowing full well that none of this could compete with what he really wanted."
nice line, hun and great use of drabble word
| silver ruffian chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
You had me at "Lisa B" and "haunted soul". Very, very nice, Kate! You packed a lot of angst in here. Most writers hate Lisa and won't put her in a story. It's nice seeing her here.
| Amberdreams chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
Ah Lisa. You've made my heart ache for her all over again. Beautifully written and it merited a double drabble, no question. Every word counted.