Reviews for Cold Embers
Fractals chapter 1 . 12/27/2013
I just loved reading you. What really amazed me is how realistic your sex scenes are. There are no exagerations, no superficial descriptions that sound completely unrealistic. It's all so... true. Great job! Plus, the way you make the characters interact... it feels so canon! I mean, Peeta is so much like Peeta and that is hell of a hard thing to do.
Once again, I just loved this!
MockingJayFlyingFree chapter 1 . 11/20/2013
Beautiful! Thanks for sharing!
Delia chapter 1 . 5/20/2013
You say "I'm lost" quite a bit.
MagTwi78 chapter 1 . 5/4/2013
This is my first HG ff and I loved it! You captured vulnerability, pain, and shifting power in just this. I really enjoyed this, thanks for writing.
MissWinkles chapter 1 . 5/4/2013
So I think you should know how much I fucking love this(you). So well written, so perfectly canon - which is a real talent - and so REAL. I'm so glad you took the time to write this. As a TwiFic reader I'm not used to the realness of a perfectly imperfect first time/s. You're swaying my fandom allegiance with you wonderful wonderful words. Is there anywhere else you post? AO3? Okay. I'll ease up on my stalking tendencies. Thank you x
Delia chapter 1 . 4/27/2013
This is perfect. I think there might be soe tips, though, because some sentences don't make sense, like " And after all they did you me".
Prizz chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
Great story! It seems Katniss has a tendency to be a slave for sex. xD I just hope, whatever happens, she will only do it with Peeta.

About the mood elevator, it gave me an idea about Peeta's unrequited love problem after the first games. After the whipping, Katniss decided to choose Gale because Peeta is the Capitol's design. If Peeta wanted to move on in a non-healthy way, but works, he can have the white pill meds. At least it's not alcohol. xD

I hope you write more Katniss x Peeta fics! You're a great writer!
xbecbebex chapter 1 . 1/21/2013
that was written so well and it still had so much heat in it. good job. i'm a big fan of all of your work.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/1/2013
Very nicely done!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/15/2012
Wow, so realistic. Great job. I really liked the way they kept talking to each other during their lovemaking, and that it wasn't just this completely perfect first time experience, which is most of the time not exactly how it goes. LOL
LeahLUVER chapter 1 . 11/7/2012
Loved it!
Miss Maia chapter 1 . 10/31/2012
It's so nice to find a good author and just have fun around his/her profile... xD
I really should get some sleep now, but maybe later I'll check on other lovely story you have posted here.
See ya!
Maia
Guest chapter 1 . 10/29/2012
That was great
PeetasAndHerondales chapter 1 . 10/18/2012
woooo that was hot at the end, and a wonderful story of how they grew back together, I absolutely loved it!
Mrs.Moony86 chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
Good job on this.
I like that Peeta and Katniss worked so hard to rediscover themselves. It felt realistic.
Good work.
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