|Reviews for When Friendship Shines|
| Bozo39 chapter 1 . 7/21/2013
Thanks for a great oneshot. Just what I needed after a loonnggg day at school. Great writing, could you maybe do more?
| MissWisy chapter 1 . 11/27/2012
I'd just like to point out that if u are doing this as the BBC version you've got the wrong category
| FlutteringLights chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
I like the story! I'd love it if you continued.
One constructive criticism, though, and please don't take offense-but you've got some sentence structure errors. Things like confusing "you're" and "your", "ill" and "I'll", and other grammatical problems, including awkward wording and just plain incorrect wording. I liked the story in spite of that, but you should really consider either using a spell check feature, or getting a beta, or even just re-reading your story very closely.
Don't let that discourage you, though! It was sweet and interesting, and I'd want to see more!