|Reviews for Delectable Distractions|
| angel897 chapter 1 . 9/27/2012
way hot loved it :)
| hoenibii chapter 1 . 9/4/2012
As you mentioned, not that much of a plot but very well written and really hot! :)
I liked reading it!
| KatnissandPrimWeasley chapter 1 . 9/4/2012
Ooh, very good! I love this pairing.
I do have a bit of constructive criticism, though. You could do with using a broader vocabulary. For example, you use the words "particularly" and "in the slightest" very often. There are also a few places where you put unnecessary commas, where there wouldn't have been a pause in your voice, had you been reading out loud. For example, "In a matter of moments, however, a large hand, with cold fingertips, was placed on the back of her neck." The commas after "hand" and "fingertips" are unnecesary. (I hope you don't take this the wrong way, it's actually my first ever review on this website.)
Keep writing, you're a talented writer!
| FrogizZ94 chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
Looking foward to that "perhaps during a private, late-night lesson" this fic is great!
| LuminousMinds chapter 1 . 8/13/2012
Jesus Christ. This was...wow...I don't even...like, damn.
Definitely a favorite! You should write more for these two. It's ridiculously good. And siriusly sexy.
| Venetiangrl92 chapter 1 . 8/13/2012
fantastic! i loved it!
| Smithback chapter 1 . 8/12/2012