Reviews for Separation
The Phantom Dragon chapter 3 . 9/5/2014
fluffies! more please!
Makoisthebabe chapter 3 . 7/23/2014
This was absolutely beautiful. Keep it up.
Guest chapter 3 . 10/6/2013
ladybug114 chapter 3 . 1/1/2013
that was awesome! i loved it sooo much :)
SwampTreader chapter 3 . 8/25/2012
Why does this not have more reviews!? This was so good! I loved it and so well written! Nothing was corny or rushed and when Mako woke up!? Just wow that was some good writing I absolutely loved when Mako was waking up seriously! It was perfect and PERFECTLY described sooooo good
wolfeclipse25 chapter 3 . 8/21/2012
Great story! I loved the emotion displayed from Bolin; especially when he finally realized why Mako works so hard for him when he's sick.
Hachinoko chapter 2 . 8/15/2012


No shipping check? Check! Ossum characterization? Check! Feels? Check!

You have SUCH a knack for writing and I lav it. You write out all the little details and gestures so many authors miss, and it's great.

I eagerly the next installment!
JustSlightlyCrazy chapter 1 . 8/13/2012
Wow. You wouldn't believe how excited I got when I realised you had posted a new fic. :D And it was a Legend of Korra one too! :) I loved this! I am a major fan of Mako and Bolin's brotherly relationship, and you've managed to capture Bolin's character pretty accurately! :) Looking forward to the next chapter :) x
000000000000000000000Zero00000 chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
Personally, I was never happy about how the creators handled the "city life" idea.

With Republic city came so many exciting backgrounds like prison, gangs, street fights, citywide events, races, police interference, urban exploration, etc., but instead all they focused on was the anti-bender rebellion and a plot that was too fast to explore the city itself, or the relationships between characters.

It's nice to see someone taking an interest in these things enough to write a well-written fic.