|Reviews for Devotion Unseen|
| riorio chapter 1 . 6/3
You portrayed Ayase's feelings well...
| Dean Hanel chapter 1 . 11/25/2014
Oh my god, those feels. It fits the tone of the show, but I think that gave all of us enough feels for a lifetime. It's great, though! Keep up the good work!
| nec sine te chapter 1 . 10/5/2014
Really sad, shame it doesn't continue. . .
| Half-Blind Otaku chapter 1 . 11/15/2013
That... That was beautiful; I always thought that Ayase needed more screen time in the series, especially at the end.
The only real criticism I can offer is that the word 'bosom' doesn't quite fit my perception of Ayase's character, but that's just my opinion.
Great Job, I'd love to see more.
| PopPunkRocker4321 chapter 1 . 6/7/2013
A deep perspective from Ayase's point of view. Though I ship both pairings (ShuXInori and ShuXAyase), realistically, post-Guilty Crown, it would probably be ShuXAyase. Of course, it would be hard for Shu to move on.
Enough of my ranting, Anyways, good job!
| Elmion chapter 1 . 5/6/2013
A nice look at Ayase's perspective and how she sees Shu and Inori throughout the show. Heartbreaking as well, but that just makes me love it all the more.
| Lost Guy chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
ok this had me tearing up i must say. ok i would kill for another chapter on this. just saying. *cries*
| Tensa chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
You have a nice way with words. Pity it doesn't continue
| Raychaell Dionzeros chapter 1 . 8/14/2012