Reviews for Devotion Unseen
Half-Blind Otaku chapter 1 . 11/15/2013
That... That was beautiful; I always thought that Ayase needed more screen time in the series, especially at the end.

The only real criticism I can offer is that the word 'bosom' doesn't quite fit my perception of Ayase's character, but that's just my opinion.

Great Job, I'd love to see more.
PopPunkRocker4321 chapter 1 . 6/7/2013
A deep perspective from Ayase's point of view. Though I ship both pairings (ShuXInori and ShuXAyase), realistically, post-Guilty Crown, it would probably be ShuXAyase. Of course, it would be hard for Shu to move on.
Enough of my ranting, Anyways, good job!
Elmion chapter 1 . 5/6/2013
A nice look at Ayase's perspective and how she sees Shu and Inori throughout the show. Heartbreaking as well, but that just makes me love it all the more.
Lost Guy chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
ok this had me tearing up i must say. ok i would kill for another chapter on this. just saying. *cries*
Tensa chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
You have a nice way with words. Pity it doesn't continue
Raychaell Dionzeros chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
So sad...