Reviews for Beasts and Monsters (Major Editing)
Filisgirl251 chapter 14 . 11/23/2014
Loved it
ZabuzasGirl chapter 1 . 9/17/2013
Update immediately, please!
ZabuzasGirl chapter 14 . 7/30/2013
Update immediately, please!
Guest chapter 7 . 3/10/2013
What would happen to Dakota and Brooklin's relationship should Angela come along? Would there be a love triangle, or would it be only the other too? And Brooklin timedancing, he had a mate after that; would she be the one mentioned or Dakota? And if not Dakota, what will happen?
Trying to Put Pen to Paper chapter 15 . 3/4/2013
Take your time I know Exactly how stressful and in the way school/college can be. Hope you pass your exams!
Scimitar X chapter 15 . 3/3/2013
Cool well its time for me to get back in the game myself I can't wait for it to come out.
DeadlyWriter chapter 15 . 3/3/2013
Its ok Take your Time. I am also on hold with mind as well. So no rush
To'M'L Kuran chapter 14 . 1/21/2013
love the story and SOOOOOOO glad you're doing season 2! can't wait!
amber chapter 14 . 1/18/2013
What happen next?
lilani127 chapter 13 . 1/7/2013
please don't delete it i love reading it n your character. If you think she is to bland try developing her more in your mind and make a chapter all about her n how she views things or more about her life and feelings.I would love to read a chapter all about her and one with more of her and brooklyn as a couple. you can aslo do some chaps with her and each of the characters seperately, that way its something that is completelt from you :) If you ever have any direct questions i would love to give my opinion cuz i would hate to see your story go away. I'm also writing an Inuyasha story and felt the way you did about scrapping it and starting over but my brother said to keep and just add to it or work ahead and come back to it til i'm happy with it. I hope anything i say helps n if you ever need me feel free to just message me
lilani127 chapter 11 . 1/7/2013
I like it but there were a few that could have made it better. Trust me when i say try not to be in a hurry to write the next chapter for us cuz it will make it more likely that you will make mistakes. I sure your reader can wait especially if it means a well written chapter. I noticed a few spelling errors and i also noticed that you seemd to rush through the story leaving a few thing out, like how you failed to write in how they defeated the other silver steel gargoyle you showed that there were three. goliath was fighting the red then broadway, lexington, dakota, and brooklyn fought one of the others. Don't be afraid to add more detail cuz it will not only make you chapter longer but more detailed for your readers to picture the scenes you write. also make sure you don't lose sight of your characters details to make her stand out. I loved reading this chapter thanks for writing it cuz i was sad when i finished reading it all and saw how you weren't gona continue until feb. I totally understand though since life can throw alot at you at once and make it hard to continue your story but thank you i really did like it and i hope my review can help in any way oh and thank you for the dedication to :) I feel special
Scimitar X chapter 14 . 1/1/2013
I love this story I can't wait for season 2 and is brooklyn going to have his crush on Maggie the cat?
Trying to Put Pen to Paper chapter 14 . 1/1/2013
Defo do the puch oc story I really want to see that! This is a grate chapter and the tweaking with Dakota is going verry well. You said in the last chap if you should bring Dakota to Avalon, YES! That would work very well. Especially for the Future episode where Brooklin is leader. I dont think Dakota will like Demona being with him :3
brittneyangel chapter 13 . 12/31/2012
your story isnot boring really enjoy it but i can understand about haveing douts about ur story but it is wondorful but in my opinion i would really like to see more romance between dakota and brooklyn and maybe a jelouse seen when you bring maggie into the story? i would really love to see that. and I dont really want dakota to go avalon i want her to stay
Trying to Put Pen to Paper chapter 13 . 12/31/2012
It was a grate chapter, you did a good job with Dakota. She seem's to have taken a big sister role (not unlike my own big sister). in my own opinion give her a little more time in the next chapter as she seemed to be a back character in this one. Cant wait for the next chapter :3
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