Reviews for The Fluff is a Lie
Yo chapter 1 . 8/15/2012
I pretty much agree with what the other reviewer mentioned, though I will say that my exact progression was from curious-cute-amusing-omgwtfbbq?!

Glad to see you're still writing!
For Spite chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
Well, that's nicely cute and off-putting. I need to go look at chibi-Setsuna chapters again to make sure I have the proportions exactly right in my head.

I'd say "you said you'd probably write something and you did" but apparently this was an old work. It's well-done, just a bit...pointless sounds harsh but you see what I mean, right? That's not saying I didn't enjoy it (see the "it's well-done" part) just that it doesn't really provide plot or character development or do anything but make me smile. That last part is sometimes enough, though. Because it did make me smile, but then I'm an odd person.

A minor complaint: Since you went through the effort of mentioning that this was a challenge response, the exact challenge being met would be a good thing in your author's notes.