|Reviews for Heartlines|
| RosaMeiWhite2 chapter 1 . 8/13/2013
I was literally laughing when i read this! It was just so funny... Keep on writing more of these gymleaderxgymleader fics! :D
| public enemy no. 5 chapter 1 . 6/23/2013
Wa! This was so cute! And it's a big change from Cress' normally cool and collected demeanor; it's adorable how he gets so flustered in front of Elesa. :)
| metallicgreen chapter 1 . 5/21/2013
Hi! You gave me an inspiring review a while ago and I was hoping to return the favor :)
ELESA! Your portrayal of her was spot on. I think my favorite line of hers was "Well, the difference between you brothers is remarkable" - she comes across as super cool and smart and amazing, and considering it's from Cress's point of view, it just rocks. Nicely done, hope to see more from you!
| ShyKneeStardust chapter 1 . 10/5/2012
This is soo sweet! I love it!
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/15/2012
I'm so glad someone decided to write about Cress and Elesa. I agree, more people need to write about it.
I like the tone of the passage, considering it was from Cress's point of view thus semi-automatically deemed "serious", but you also managed to add some humor. I think you did a good job with characterization, especially Chili's dialogue.
Continue with the good work and I hope you write more CressElesa!