|Reviews for Curse of Immortality|
| Lauren chapter 8 . 2/5/2014
I loved this please don't be the end and if it's not please update soon.
| Jenrenegade chapter 8 . 4/7/2013
Awww, you need to update this. I'm really liking it.
| CrimsonQueen24 chapter 8 . 3/26/2013
This is pretty good so far. Looking back at when this was published I'm surprised you connected the dots so well! The fact that you guessed Jem was Brother Zacariah before you even read Clockwork Princess is amazing. My one complaint is that Brother Zacariah seems to be a bit too emotional for a Silent Brother, even if he is the most human among them. Anyway I'm looking forward to the next update.
| QuidditchFlyer19 chapter 1 . 11/21/2012
| Guest chapter 8 . 10/24/2012
THIS. WHOLE. STORY. IS. AMAZING.
I. LOVE. YOUR. STYLE.
HOW. DID. YOU. MANAGE. TO. DO. THIS?
I. LOVE. THIS. STORY. SO. MUCH.
not to mention that i am a jem/tessa fan, but how you made this seem so real, although it might not be, we never know, i dont know. but its just awesome- i mean i wish you would update it mroe- and not leave cliff-hagners- PLEASE!
BEST. STORY. OF JEM/TESSA. EVER.
supporting you always 3
| baneswoman chapter 7 . 10/21/2012
NO I DONT MIND AT ALL! :B
| TessaHalpin chapter 6 . 10/2/2012
Hurry and post the next chapter I want to know who was at the door!
| Esin of Sardis chapter 6 . 9/30/2012
ahhhh! hate cliffhangers and can't wait until next weekend! i'm dying right here along with tessa and jem. jem is like my favourite of all favourite characters and it's so sad! i know thats probably won't get better soon, but part of me wishes they would!
| ByTheAngelIsThatWillHerondale chapter 5 . 9/28/2012
OMG this is amazing! I've had theories of Jem being Brother Zachariah for a while now...PLEASE keep writing this story its so good!
| Shey chapter 5 . 9/23/2012
Another great chapter. There's nothing else to say except that I love this story. Please update soon. :)
| Guest chapter 5 . 9/23/2012
PERFECT PERFECT PWRFECT ALL PF THIS IS PWRFECT DON'T CHANGE A THING!
| TheImpossibleGirlOswin chapter 5 . 9/23/2012
| BookLoverTillTheEndXxXx chapter 5 . 9/23/2012
You are portraying the characters perfectly! Two chapters in one day? Lucky me :) can't wait for the next one :) xoxo
| BookLoverTillTheEndXxXx chapter 4 . 9/23/2012
Yep, that was 100% amazing! Dont worry about the wait. If a wait is equal to that good of a chapter then take all the time you need. Can't wait for the next one :) xoxo
| depthsofthemind chapter 4 . 9/22/2012
This is exactly why while I am desperate to read Clockwork Princess, I am also afraid too. I can not think of a single way any of our Treo will be all right at the end, they are all so close to eachother, but so close to shattering eachother and themselves as well. If you had waited another week to put this up it would have still been worth the wait.