|Reviews for Nightmare|
| iloveromance chapter 3 . 9/14/2012
Oh this is intriguing! I hope nothing happens to Daphne! I'm glad she went to Niles but I think if he knew she might be in danger he'd be more perceptive to her dilemma. Hope you post more soon!
| iloveromance chapter 2 . 9/14/2012
Wow, how awful! I hope Daphne can help her!
| jessie 33 chapter 1 . 8/20/2012
Great start to your story, hope you update your story again soon.
| NeuwroticMadam chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
Hi! I think this is great. It seems like you could't decide whether to write this in script form or story form so you just did both. This is kind of confusing to the reader. It also wouldn't hurt to indent when a different person starts talking. If you decide to do it in script form, indent when you cue someone to talk. Ex:
Harvest: blah blah blah blah blah
Daphne:blah blah blah blah blah blah blah
And commas and periods are your friend. Other than all that, its a great story!
| iloveromance chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
Aw, so like Daphne to want to help! Hope there's more to this story!
| Kristen3 chapter 1 . 8/13/2012
Aw, typical Daphne, wanting to help someone in need! :) Great start!