I like how this has started. Looking forward to the next chapter.

This has me very excited! I cannot wait to read the next part, I hope you post it soon! I cannot decide where I think you are going with it, some crazy proposal or something else entirely. Either way, I am excited. I think you write Kate and her feelings very well, her train of thought seems very imaginable.

Mathilde

Great beginning! I can't wait to read more.

Oh, you can't -you have t - no!

Ooh. Interesting. I'll follow, see where this goes. Nice start

interesting start kind of sweet feeling but with an undercurrent...should i be worried :S

Wow loved it. Cant wait for the next chapter :)

Wow promising beginning, great idea.

Very interesting beginning so is this him giving her clues to find him for a game or is it something more sinister. Can't wait to see how it all unfolds.