|Reviews for Me and You|
| Bankai neko chapter 1 . 1/21
I'm sure this is a very amusing story, and I'm not starting a flame here, but I honestly couldn't read it all the way through with all of the misspelling and grammatical errors. Which is a pity, because from what I summarized from it, it looks like it would've been a cute story. :/ I'm sorry if you are offended at all, or if this is a translated fic. This is just my opinion, throw it away if you see fit. Have a nice day. :)
| lizziehanley chapter 18 . 12/28/2013
i love this couple and i like your story but PLEASE fix your fucking grammar ok thx
| hello kitty chapter 17 . 10/14/2013
I love this fanfic so much! Please update soon...
| no name chapter 1 . 10/14/2013
Update soon please!
| Zola33 chapter 17 . 10/4/2013
so good the story, please upload fast wanna read the crazy moment of the birth. great story
| Genny chapter 17 . 10/2/2013
Hi...thank you for making this story...I am very interested to know what's going to happen next...please I hope you can finish it...thank you again
Take care and regards,
| lia chapter 1 . 8/11/2013
Interesting story! Even though, at first I feel confused to read your story, but its okay... Because the story is very very good and interesting... Keep writting... Update soon, please! Really anticipating this story...
| thita chapter 1 . 8/11/2013
Really love this story! Even if this story is not update yet, I always reread this story... Maybe I've been read this fanfic about 5 times now... Please update it soon! Author nim, fighting!
| gwen chapter 1 . 8/11/2013
Great story! And always, great story always come from a great author! Really love your fanfic. Please don't stop writting this fanfic. Its really hard to find a great love rain fanfic. This is the only fanfic about love rain that I love... Update it soon, please...
| unknown chapter 1 . 8/11/2013
Wah... Wonderful story... But when will you update again this story? I'm really really curious about it... Please update it soon... Please... Please...
Anyway, you are a great author! Two thumbs up for you!
| lizziehanley chapter 1 . 6/28/2013
i really like this story and i'm looking forward for the next chapter hope you will update soon xx
| lizziehanley chapter 16 . 6/28/2013
is this story beta'ed?
| Guest chapter 5 . 6/23/2013
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| moy chapter 15 . 5/25/2013
| TheMidwestJess chapter 6 . 4/3/2013
Ok, I have to ask. Your native language isn't English, is it? I promise, I tried reading while ignoring all the grammatical errors, but I could only get up to this point. If you would like some constructive criticism, here it is. If not, just ignore my review.
Your pace is incredibly too fast. You need to slow down and elaborate on things rather than barely mentioning them and four other things in the same breath. Also, get a beta. Or something. Something that would help with the glaring language issue. You don't even put periods at the end of your sentences, let alone match verb tense or even make complete sentences. This is more like a stream of consciousness than a story. And lastly, I'm sorry, but the plot really isn't all that great without much detail in the story. If it had more detail, the plot might be more interesting, but you just skip so much.
I'm sorry if I hurt your feelings, but I feel that as a reader, my opinion needed to be stated so that you're aware of some of the issues with this story. Until/unless you fix the readability, I don't think there's much I can praise about this story.