|Reviews for dark blood|
| Yugi Muto chapter 5 . 1/7/2013
this is a good story keep up the good work
| Rain of the Forest chapter 5 . 10/5/2012
WHAAAAA! I LIKED THIS STORY! WHY DID YOU HAVE TO STOP!
| Rain of the Forest chapter 4 . 10/5/2012
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! THAT IS FUNNY! RUN YUGI RUN!
| Rain of the Forest chapter 3 . 10/5/2012
| Rain of the Forest chapter 2 . 10/5/2012
Okay... Yugi and Joey actually KNOW Atem in this? I'm confused...
| Harvest Dragon chapter 3 . 9/17/2012
Check your inbox...
| Rain of the Forest chapter 1 . 8/30/2012
Why do I have a feeling that person was Yami? -_-
Flames are when people yell at you through a message and criticize you without the sarcasm involved.
| Harvest Dragon chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
Eek! I was really frank, and it came across quite badly. I promise I wasn't trying to be mean; just that I was in "critic mode."
Just so you know, my statements still stand: but I didn't mean to be harsh.
| Harvest Dragon chapter 5 . 8/13/2012
It really seems disjointed...
I'm trying my best, but this story has so many holes. Perhaps you could get a beta reader?
Well, this is the last of my free time, so till we meet again,
P.S. feel free to critique my work as well.
| Harvest Dragon chapter 2 . 8/13/2012
Well...I'll be quite frank.
Vampire stories are quite overdone in this franchise, and because of this you must make your story stand out. It's a must.
I don't really sense a flow in your writing at all. Do you have a plot? How the heck did ATEM of all people save him? Why does he have a body? Wasn't he a spirit?
I'm asking these questions to make YOU think about how to do this story. I'll keep reading, but this needs some work.
Ever tasteful fic deserves a review.