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Lulu 7 chapter 3 . 8/16/2012
Oh dear. Poor Hermione, and in a way, poor Severus-because he's misunderstood so much. Namely, the facts that he thinks he can't have Hermione, that he now might blame his nephew for hurting Hermione. So poor Draco as well.

Aw, Hermione. Cheer up. It's hard being lonely, but you just have to wait it out. :)

Well done again! I'm looking forward to these two finding their way to each other, unless you make this ridiculously tragic and have them all die. Which, actually I might not mind if you made this into an action story and twisted up the plot a lot.

Do you have any plot twists in mind? I think it'd do a lot to improve the wide appeal of this story. We love SSHG fluff (and sadness) but some drama would be the clincher.

Keep writing!
-Lulu
Lusting for Life chapter 3 . 8/16/2012
Please keep going!
ThePenIsMighty chapter 3 . 8/16/2012
Looking forward to more.
xXxhurting-insidexXx chapter 3 . 8/16/2012
Love Even More Than The Rest (( :
heartmom88 chapter 3 . 8/16/2012
Rotten luck, Hermione... But I have a feeling there's hope on the horizon.

Thanks for posting!
hm88
angel897 chapter 3 . 8/16/2012
liked it hope that they meet up soon. happy you updated today as well :)
angel897 chapter 2 . 8/16/2012
loving it so please keep writing kay
naru894 chapter 2 . 8/15/2012
this little thing brightened my day cant wait to keep on reading
bournespeed chapter 2 . 8/15/2012
Severus' fertile imagination :)
roon0 chapter 2 . 8/14/2012
Another excellent chapter. Poor Hermione, set up with those dreadful dates. I cannot wait for Hermione and Severus to meet up.
Ja495ck chapter 2 . 8/14/2012
Please Please PLEASE update! Those spectacularly horrific dates made my day.
heartmom88 chapter 2 . 8/14/2012
Severus is having a little too much fun at Hermione's expense. ;)

Did you mean to refer to "hindsight" in the same paragraph where Severus was reflecting on how Hermione ended up in his lap? :D

Thanks for posting again so soon!
hm88
Sithtar chapter 2 . 8/14/2012
OK, now I know you said this is a re-write of your story but I'm not seeing a difference here. I well remember this story this seems exactly the same.
bournespeed chapter 1 . 8/13/2012
Great that you're reposting, was enjoying this the first time around. Looking forward to seeing the changes you've made.
naru894 chapter 1 . 8/13/2012
i think i had already read the other version of this story, cant wait to read this one
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