Reviews for Taking Chances
Guest chapter 21 . 11/9/2014
Absolutely love it!
Kate93 chapter 21 . 9/15/2014
I was thinking about ducky and I have a cat myself and I was thinking if you could write a small part including ducky would be so cute! For instance, when my cat was younger she would wonder off far and I would be searching the neighborhood late at night for my kitten (cloudy) who loved to climb the fence and wander off.
Just a suggestion...
Ducky could wander off late at night or gets lost during the day by the boys and gets forgotten.
Or ducky gets hurt somehow; chased down by dogs or something.
Or ace meets a sweet boy at the tracks and gives him ducky to keep. That way you can introduce this new boy as an important character. A new "friend" of ace that race may not like, or maybe someone who lies about their name at first and turns out to be one of ace's younger brothers!(plot twist!)
Just some ideas/ suggestions for you, in case you still are having trouble figuring out where you want to take the story. I'm confident that story will be good, anyhow!
Kate93 chapter 21 . 9/15/2014
Hey, I reviewed earlier and I barely mentioned the story!
I love ace and race together and how ace got her name. Also how there names are similar,makes you wanna rhyme...(Race kissing Ace, all over her face, kisses so sweet, gave her a toothache!) [i don't know where that came from...]
I think your doing great developing a plot! I'm imagining it all unfold. and I feel like it's gonna have a lot to do with ace facing her past, her mother, something happening between her and race where they have a huge fight and break up(temporarily hopefully) maybe race getting too involved and help set up something where her parents or brothers make it to see one of her shows..*cue dramatic music* there reactions could start the fight that makes them break up and ace might run away and maybe even run into mrs. Delancy and gives up on her dreams and goes back working there..I'm running away with my thoughts. I've always wanted to write my own story and post it on fanfic, but...I'm lazy. I have ideas and a will but I'm too lazy to even sign into my account let alone start a story! Lol good luck!
Kate93 chapter 21 . 9/15/2014
I love your story! It's sucks you take along time to update but I understand. I actually love how you explain yourself, talk a little about your personal life, and care to consider informing us. I'm reading this POTC fanfic and she never updates and when she does is very discreet. We all have things to do but it's nice when the author cares about her readers. It makes it more personal and worthwhile. :)
Guest chapter 21 . 4/25/2014
omg plz update! easily my favorite fanfiction ever!
aRowe chapter 21 . 11/30/2013
Amazing don't quit (:
Clara chapter 21 . 8/30/2013
Clara chapter 21 . 8/20/2013
I LOVES IT! I read it in the course of 2 days and I NEEDS YOUSE TO UPDATE!
AlphaBadWolf chapter 21 . 8/8/2013
Brilliant! I absolutely loved it. I like how you're using the Ryan Breslin Racetrack. Don't get me wrong, Max Casella will always have a special place in my heart, but its nice to see a change. You're doing a great job as to keeping all of the "newsie fanfiction cliches" out of this story. I also love that you made a love interest for Crutchie. He deserves one for being so freaking adorable! I can't wait for you to update! Keep up the great work!
TheSecretPen1987 chapter 21 . 7/29/2013
love this story. Ace and Race (hey that rhymes! hahah) are adorable. keep up the great writing!
Therealred chapter 21 . 7/28/2013
Omg don't stop!
Lucy chapter 20 . 4/27/2013
Just caught with the story, by far the best Newsies fanfiction I've read. Looking forward to see how it ends up :D xxxx
Peyton chapter 20 . 4/13/2013
Ooooohhh this story in all honesty is probably the best fanfiction of any person I have ever read in my life! And I've read a lot! It is simply perfect not too fast or slow and I love the characters and how you put them! I love ace! AND THANKYOU for basing race off the one and only bred ident it's just not the same if its a race fanfic and its not based off of bres...well anyways! THANKYOU I have never reviewed for a fanfic on any site (like I said I've read a lot) but this one is so good I just had to please tell me all about your trip to NYC I actually just went on one for spring break too I JUST LOVE IT and please please please PLEASE don't stop writing it I hate it when people do that and ik u will eventually have to end it but please not anytime soon and also please don't be one of those people who gets the lead chic prego...please...I hate those fanfics...but anyways THANKS
SamanthaButt chapter 20 . 4/11/2013
I love how the story is going so far, hurarrah!
Ealasaid Una chapter 20 . 4/10/2013
Is she really ok? I am glad race is with her.
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