Reviews for The Fear of Being Alone
random reader chapter 4 . 10/21
I have enjoyed some of your stories but I feel compelled to write this time. An interesting story, and I like the idea of Joe and Vera being together (why not?) but Vera is not in her 40s or even early 50s: she has got to be in her (late) 60s. This is just beyond believability that she could accidentally get pregnant. That kind of ruined it for me.
Natalie chapter 2 . 1/20/2014
Im not picking fault, but Ive noticed a small error. You said it was 5 months since Vera last saw Stuart, so how can she be 8 weeks pregnant? Surely she must be just over 5 months pregnant. Other than that, this is a really sweet story! A follow up about the baby would be lovely.
Sadie chapter 4 . 9/24/2013
More please!
Natalie chapter 1 . 9/16/2013
Well... I didnt see that one coming!
But isnt Vera meant to be in her late 50s so a pregnancy wouldnt be very likely.
LoverToLover chapter 4 . 9/16/2012
Lovely ending to the story, very emotional! i wish this would happen in the real thing!

Eden xox
LoverToLover chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
Wonderful I really liked it and I dont think it was too out of character because I can imagine them saying those lines. as always I can't wait to read more of your fantastic writing!

Eden x